FanFics ~Jay Style~ The Celestial Zone

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 17: Upgrade, upgrade, upgrade! A reunion!?

2008-09-17T07:28:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Are you all enjoying the stories? Pls leave your comments on the story so i know what you expect to happen in the story. Any questions on the story will entertained asap by me. For those who follow the actual story of the celestial zone, can you guess which part of the story am i at now?

"Wait a minute, you are telling me that you are the son of The Terminator? But why didn't my family database have any records of this?" Mira asked.

"Dad knew it was dangerous for me if anyone aside from the organization found out. And besides, we are not really blood related." J.Jay answered.

"So do you know how he terminates ESPers?" Ryu asked excitedly.

"I'm sorry Ryu, I do know but i am not going to reveal the secret unless Dad decides to tell you himself. He would be arriving to Singapore soon." J.Jay answered apologetically.

"Oh, I see. Well, I respect that." Ryu said.

"Ah, I am sorry to intrude but may I request a match with all of you?" Kakushi suddenly requested.

All eyes were on her.

"Are you sure? I mean, Jay here just treated your injuries last night." Ryu asked worriedly.

Kakushi nodded.

"Of course it wont be now. a few days later I suppose. I will visit soon. But I need to take my leave now." she said bowing. J.Jay bowed back.

After Kakushi left and everyone had settled down, J.Jay asked.

"You all aren't angry I kept this from you?"

"Not at all. After all, something like this cannot be revealed so easily. I understand." Mira replied.

"I agree. I won't have believed you in the first place." Ryu answered.

A few days later, Kakushi arrived for the match. They found a large secluded area and prepared to fight. Kakushi explained that it would be a one on one fight. Naturally it would span across a couple of days. Also, she explained that Achilles requested this match as a test for J.Jay's abilities and also his friends as a added bonus.

J.Jay was up first. Decided to start the ball rolling, he did not waste any time. Instantly, he activated his abilities and the mark of Libra appeared. In a flash, he had closed the distance between him and Kakushi. His right arm poised for an uppercut, he shouted as he executed the attack.

"Rozan Sho Ryu Ha!!"

Kakushi flipped back with incredible agility, feeling the wave of energy as it raised into the sky. Looking up, she saw an image of a dragon rising into the sky. I don't dare to imagine what would have happened to me if it actually connected. But now, a moments distraction could prove dangerous, she quickly counter attacked by firing several ESP shurikens at J.Jay.

Unable to get away in time, J.Jay took several shurikens head on. Shit, Sho Ryu Ha is a move that leaves me open for 2 seconds if the move does not connect. That's what I get for being careless. Getting back on his feet he was met with another onslaught of shurikens from Kakushi. Thinking fast, he activated another ability.

The sign of Virgo appeared.

"Kan!!" J.Jay shouted, placing his palms together.

In a flash of pink light which formed into a giant lotus bud enveloped J.Jay and began to bloom, its petals spreading outwards deflecting the shurikens away. Changing to long ranged tactics, J.Jay opened his palms, a ball of energy forming while the lotus barrier still stood as Kakushi fired shurikens again and again in an attempt to find a weak spot.

Cupping his hands in a meditative stance, the lotus barrier quickly reformed into an energy being shaped like a virgin on a horse. With a sword in hand, it dashed towards Kakushi.

"Tenma Kofuku!!" J.Jay shouted.

Nimbly, Kakushi avoided the attacks of the energy being and managing to swivel to its back, fired shurikens at both the being and J.Jay. Prepared, J.Jay dodged the shurikens while the being got pin cushioned with shurikens. Undeterred, the energy being turned around and continued swinging its sword at Kakushi.

Seeing as there is no other way, Kakushi had to use her Vacuum Sword Play to hack the energy being into pieces. Turning to J.Jay, she launched a full scale attack of slashes every where. Before long, J.Jay, being incapable of keeping up with the speed of attacks was cut many times.

Knowing that this would eventually result in his loss, he changed abilities again. This time, the Mark of Capricorn appeared. Knowing full well by now that a different sign meant some new ability, Kakushi attempted to slash J.Jay from over head to finish the match. In a surprise move, J.Jay raised his left arm as if to shield himself from the attack.

Unable to stop now, Kakushi feared that she would hack off J.Jay's arm. As the attack connected, Kakushi felt her Vacuum Sword hit something hard. Moving back, she saw that J.Jay's arm was still intact where his sleeve was cut by the Vacuum Sword.

"Excalibur..." J.Jay quietly spoke as he swung his right arm in a vertical arc at Kakushi.

Sensing something not right, Kakushi instinctively stepped to one side. Hearing a loud snap, she turned to see the tree standing behind her had split into half. Looking closer, she saw that the split was not natural, it was cut by something.

Excalibur...he has even got a weapon like attack, incredible. However, it has many flaws... Kakushi thought as she turned back to face J.Jay as he swung his limbs, sending waves of Excalibur at Kakushi who blocked them with her Vacuum Sword.

As J.Jay moved for another attack, Kakushi stopped the match.

"Enough. You have done very well in developing your powers but they have many flaws. The biggest flaw is that your attacks are too flashy. Before you begin, if your opponents have seen the attack before, they would be prepared for it. The other big flaw is that You can only use one style at a time and you are too slow in changing styles. Had we fought on, I may have been able to catch your timing and struck you when you were the most vulnerable." she commented.

"Yeah, I am working to speed up the transition from constellation to constellation. But...I never thought of the first flaw at all. All the while I have never had to face the same opponent twice...I have to put more thought to it." J.Jay acknowledged.

Kakushi nodded.

"Good, you have not let teacher down. He had high hopes for your progress and I am sure he would be pleased to know of your achievement."

While heading back, the 3 of them had discussions on how to improve on J.Jay's flaws. In the next couple of days, Mira and Ryu both had a match with Kakushi as well and the 3 of them eventually were able to develop new upgrades to improve their powers.

Then Kakushi said she had to meet an important person and left. The same day, J.Jay received word from Achilles that he had already arrived in Singapore and would try to find time to visit as soon as possible.

The Celestial Zone .21 Fan Fic Chpt 16: The truth, a shocking development!?

2008-09-08T08:47:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: So sorry for the lack of updates, i have taken up a one month job at Chinese Garden as a Lion Dance Performer. Its a very taxing job and by the time i get home at night, i am pretty much too beat to write anything. So as a special, today i will not only update one blog, i am going to update all of them!! so here goes!

"I will tell you everything, I swear..."

That was what Mira told J.Jay an hour ago after the escape of Doll Master. Since then, they had nothing but clean themselves up and sitting on the sofa in Ryu's apartment staring at each other.

Crossing his arms, J.Jay leaned back and tapped his feet impatiently. After a while Mira started to explain the situation to the 2 friends, from the time J.Jay chased after that Ruby character to the point when she decided to break up with J.Jay.

At the end of the story, J.Jay was completely silent... Mira looked at Ryu worriedly. Ryu shrugged his shoulders and shook his head, implying that he did not know what J.Jay was thinking at all.

"Why didn't you tell me this earlier?" J.Jay spoke in a soft voice.

"Because I know you...What you would have done would no doubt brought danger to yourself and I cannot stand to have you hurt because of me." Mira replied.

"So, its my fault that things turned out this way then?" J.Jay said.

"No, it was never your fault. It was my choice and I forced you to go along with me. Its my fault." Mira shook her head.

They spent another hour sorting things out.

"What will you do now that you have betrayed 'Hermes'?" Ryu asked.

"It doesn't matter anymore. I have already done the best I can collecting information without going against the organization's protocols." Mira replied.

"No, you are wrong. It matters now because you will be a target for their assassins and I won't let you get hurt." J.Jay replied indignantly.

"sigh...What would you have me do then?" Mira asked.

"You can move in with us..." J.Jay started before he was interrupted by Ryu.

"or you can rent the apartment just across us since its been empty for some time now." he said.

"I think I will rent the apartment then." Mira agreed.

J.Jay agreed as well and with their plans settled, Mira moved in within the next couple of days. One day, while reading the newspaper, J.Jay saw something that caught his attention.

It was a picture of a large crater in a park. The article read that specialist says that the crater is not possibly man-made and that despite the sunny weather, it was possible that a lightning strike caused it.

There is no way a lightning strike caused this...Its definitely the result of an ESPer power... J.Jay thought. Gathering both Mira and Ryu, they planned a visit to that place at night.

At dusk, the trio examined the scene and were completely shocked at the breath taking residue of ESP lingering the area. Who or what ever caused it must have been extremely powerful.

However, finding no clues or anything of interest, they left the scene and headed back. While passing a HDB flat, they heard some ESPer fighting and headed to the scene. When they arrived, all they saw was a naked woman pinned to the wall by icicles.

J.Jay and Ryu blushed at the sight and quickly turned around to look the other way. Mira quickly ran over and activating her powers, melted away the icicles. supporting the woman as he was released, Mira shouted at the guys to remove their shirts and cover the woman up.

Only exposing the injured part of the body, J.Jay quickly activated the Faculty of Mutation to close up the wounds while Mira kept the body warm to prevent the cells from dying of cold. Ryu took the post of patrolling the area to make sure they were alone.

After closing the wounds, Ryu carried the woman up to Mira's apartment and laid her on the bed. Returning to the other apartment, the 2 guys waited while Mira stayed with the woman.

When day broke, Mira came in the apartment with the woman following behind. Bowing at them she introduced herself.

"Ohaiyo Gozaimasu, my name is Kamiya Kakushi, I thank you all for helping me last night."

"Kamiya!? You don't mean you are Kamiya Kakushi who is also known as the ESP Ninja from the organization!?" J.Jay jumped out of his seat.

Kakushi looked taken back.

"H...How did you know? Do I know you from somewhere?" she asked.

"Ah...No, we have only just met but i have heard much from father about you." J.Jay replied.

Father? Who is he? Kakushi thought.

"Who is your father anyway?" she asked.

"Haha, you won't believe me even if I told you...He is Achilles, the ESP Terminator."
J.Jay replied.

"WHAAAAAT!!??" the others in the room exclaimed.

"You...you know Teacher? Then are you J.Jay?" Kakushi asked.

"Yeah, I am J.Jay. Dozo yorushiku, senpai!" J.Jay replied.

Mira and Ryu were utterly lost. My ex-boyfriend is the son of THAT ESP Terminator!? My friend has such a famous dad? Holy crap! What is about to happen now?

The Celestial Zone Fan Fic Chpt 15: Gaiden Part 3

2008-08-27T10:30:00.000-07:00

Blogger’s Notes: Right on! Now are my holidays so I will try to triple my speed of updating. In case you were all wondering, how many constellations does J.Jay have? The answer is 12. By the Greek constellations, there are 12 of them revolving around the sun. Up till now, I have used Aries, Taurus, Leo, Cancer, and Scorpio. There are 7 more to go. This Chpt, u will be treated to maybe another 2 more constellation. Enjoy, and I will try to end the flashback by this chpt.

The punk shouted, “Can you catch me? Slowie!” taking off towards the specific area as though it was all planned. Looking back, the punk seemed pleased that J.Jay did not fall back, but was gaining on him.

“I swear I am going to tear this asshole apart!” J.Jay growled.

Reaching a secluded area, the punk turned around, posing a Sir Stamford Raffles Pose with a little smile on his lips. The area is nothing more than an empty space behind two warehouses on the riverside, an adequate place. Catching up a moment later, not at all looking breathless. J.Jay posed for the fight.

“Good, you’re looking good. Name’s Ruby, what’s yours?” Ruby asked, annoyingly polite.

J.Jay did not reply, merely made flapping motions with a single hand, a look of concentration on his face. Ice crystals shaped like snow flakes began to form in the air, the temperature around the area pummeled to the depths. The target punched out with his hand, a blast of icy cold wind started howling, blinding everything and pushing everything towards Ruby.

“Diamond Dust!!” he shouted, a glowing mark of Aquarius appearing in the air in front of him, then settling down to his body.

When the winds settled, Ruby was encased in an ice block, much like an ice coffin. “Spirits of Fire – Heat Skin!” Ruby said quietly amidst the howling winds. The diamond dust did not last even 5 seconds before exploding outwards. Ruby stood shaking his hands, as if shaking out water, his whole body glowing cheery red. Steam was rising from all over Ruby’s body. Ruby looked up with a smile, “You like it?”

J.Jay was taken back, finding it hard to believe Diamond Dust did not work on Ruby. He crossed his arms, preparing Great Horn in response to whatever Ruby had up his sleeves.

Ruby grinned, “Watch now!” and proceed to deactivate Heat Skin. Ruby’s eyes glowed red, clenching his fist and sprinting forward, “Akaiikugan, kai! Spirits of Wind – Cyclone Limbs!”

Ruby’s four limbs glowed green for a moment, then formed into green scales forming nicely into a set of gauntlets for the hands and greaves for the legs.

J.Jay was taken back as he lost sight of Ruby for a moment, raising his ESP perception abilities, J.Jay just barely managed to keep up with Ruby’s speed before flicking his arms out as he caught sight of Ruby’s widely grinning face at arm’s length. His arms glowed with another strange marking for an instant.

“Great Horn!!!”

A psychic shockwave in the form of a giant bull blasted out at Ruby, but was shattered after an instant of clashing with a bright green light from Ruby’s gauntlets. J.Jay’s eyes widen in surprise, as Great Horn was broken. The 2nd time his attacks were ineffective. However, they were evenly matched in power, as the gauntlets shattered upon contact with Great Horn, causing no damages whatsoever.

Ruby’s eyes glowed stabbing red for a painful moment when he came into contact with the Great Horn. When the gauntlets shattered, Ruby looked surprised for a split second before doing 3 consecutives back flips to get out of range of a sudden snap kick from J.Jay.

Not wanting to give Ruby a chance, J.Jay pointed at Ruby, the mark of Aries appearing in midair, spinning rapidly. Ruby became surrounded by a pillar of starlight.

“Starlight Extinction!!”

As Ruby began to fade away, he shouted, “Spirits of Fire - Fiery Reversal!”

The starlight burned up into nothingness, yet all it contained was a fiery image of Ruby.

“We are evenly matched, Jay. Yes I know your name. You passed! Don’t worry, I’m not your enemy. Should you want to find out more about me, ask around for Chiaki.” Echoed Ruby’s voice, laughing, daunting, mocking.

Staring around for the jerk, J.Jay tsked in frustration.

“Don’t let me catch you next time…or else…” J.Jay swore under his breath.

Back in the pub, Mira sat about anxiously, fretting over the ominously feeling she had. Hearing her message alert of her handphone, picking it up, she saw the message. It read:

“Mira, your next mission is to join the organization ‘Hermes’ and send information regarding it to Achilles. In order to avoid unnecessary trouble, you have to break up with your boyfriend by latest this week. Signed, WTB”

Mira’s eyes widen in disbelief. Break up with J.Jay? That’s the first time the organization has made such a request of its members. Surely there must have been some mistake. Sending a quick reply to WTB for confirmation, Mira waited in cold sweat for the reply.

When it arrived, Mira read it with trembling hands. Blood drained from her face when she saw the reply. Just then, a man with a moustache and a long pony tail arrived beside her. Giving her a curt bow, he introduced himself.

“Good evening, Mira Lelaine, my name is Chris, Chris the Magician. Mind if I take the seat beside you?”

Chris the Magician!? What is he doing here? Mira gave a quick nod of her head and Chris took the seat.

“Judging from your looks, it seems you have heard of me. That would make this a lot easier. So I would cut straight to the point. I am offering you a chance to join ‘Hermes’. It is a great organization but I will not reveal too much. If you are interested, I can tell you more after you have joined us.”

You have got to be kidding me…Mira thought. Talk about speak of the devil, what were the odds that she would be approached minutes after receiving her mission? What should I do? Mira’s mind raced for ideas. I am not ready yet, I need more time.

“Chris, this is so sudden…I am really not sure how to answer you. Could I have some time to think about it please? I will give you an answer by the end of the week.” Mira pleaded.

“Oh, of course, it was rude of me to have sprung this on you. Sure, I can wait until then. I hope to hear good news from you…For your sake…” Chris replied, smiling.

“Here, I will give you my number so you can contact me earlier if you wish.” Chris said before he left the seat.

Turning around, Chris was met with J.Jay, obviously green with jealousy. Smiling, Chris left, bumping into J.Jay, only to find himself suddenly enveloped in a deadly presence that he felt was all too familiar. Whipping around he tried to find the source but the only one near him was J.Jay.

Unnerved by this presence, Chris quickly fled the scene. Once outside, he heaved a huge sigh of relief… such a suffocating presence, he had only felt it from one other person, Tai Yi Dao, leader of ‘Hermes’.

Back inside, J.Jay remained silent, standing still as a statue. Mira merely stared back. Deciding to break the silence, she said:

“Look, he was not flirting with me ok? He was only here for less than 5 mins…”

But before she could finish, J.Jay shook his head.

“Don’t bother, I trust you. And…and…” he stuttered. “I am sorry for everything I said just now.”

“Don’t mention it…I never took it too hard.” Mira reassured him.

After that, they left the pub, Mira feeling heavy in her heart…… All week long, she could not concentrate, could not sleep nor eat properly. The thought of breaking up with J.Jay wore her down. Before, she knew it, the one week was up and she made a painful choice.

That fateful night 2 months ago, she broke up with J.Jay, bringing a start to the events that have occurred and tearing J.Jay apart.

Back to the present,

“Mira!!! I want answers and you are going to give it to me!!” J.Jay screamed.

“Haiz……Calm down first, J.Jay…”Mira sighed.

“Fuck you!! How the fuck do you expect me to fucking calm…” J.Jay began.

In a flash, Mira landed one of her famous jump kicks right smack on his face and J.Jay fell flat on his butt. Trying to get up, he realized how beat up and tired he was so he just sat there, trying to recover some strength.

“I am sorry J.Jay, I promise, I will tell you and Ryu everything…I swear, everything.” Mira said.

Oooops, a minor mistake

2008-08-26T20:33:00.000-07:00

Well, it appears in my excitement at putting up the new blog, i forgot to put the link there. Here it is http://sacredforcerevelations.blogspot.com

New Blog Up

2008-08-24T20:49:00.000-07:00

Ok, the 3rd blog is up. I had trouble because i could not think of a good name for it. I still think the name is kinda weird but i will let it slide. look forward to the first chapter and new chapters on the way!

New Blog up and the next coming!!

2008-08-21T09:11:00.000-07:00

Well, i said i would come up with a new story so here it is!

For you to know, i have another blog here http://legendofsword.blogspot.com/ There is no relation whatsoever between these 2 even as another blog coming up soon. Do not fear, it does not mean that i wont be posting here anymore!

Therefore, i will be having 3 stories ongoing. Do be patient as it might take some time to update. also, if any one is interested in drawing do let me know as i am looking for artists to draw pics if needed to facilitate understanding for the story.

Now look forward to the first chapter and the next blog, which i will post probably tomorrow or the day after.

Competition results and new story possibly coming?

2008-08-19T09:29:00.000-07:00

Right, first off, i did not do as well as i had hoped. but i am not ashamed because the other competitors were really really strong. But i think most of you wanna know the actual results right? So here it is, i got 8.13 points out of a total of 10 points.

The difference?

Several opponents got 8.3 or 8.4 onwards. as you see, even a 0.2 difference gives a gold or silver medal to your opponents. Gotta work harder for next year then.

Oh, and the new story? I am planning to write both fanfiction and a story of my own at the same time so readers will have more chapters to look forward to.

Sure, i said original but in a sense, i am still borrowing other people's work, namely several well known comics and animations.

Now, don't go all :"Jeremy 'Jay'! You lousy no good lazy bum! Get your own work!!" on me yet. I have done my homework okay? I am merely borrowing aspects and not the whole thing so the overall thing would still be an original conception of mine.

Right, now, did i say a new story? I forgot to mention the sudden brainwave i just had so make it possibly 2 new stories coming!

Bwahahaha!! *Gets rotten stuff thrown into his face by all his fictional characters*

Eh-Hem! *Cleans himself up*

Okay, quick review on the stories. Pls note, they are work in progress, so therefore, subjected to change. The review is to whet your appetite for the possible stories.

First Story:
Based also in Singapore, the story follows a young man's journey through NS, discovering many deadly secrets and the power hidden within him! First he is fighting for just his country, but as things go out of control, he finds the fate of the world hanging in the balance... what will happen to him and all the people he meets? Special appearence: The Phoenix Force!!

P.S. If you don't know who The Phoenix Force is, go to this link http://marvel.com/universe/Phoenix_Force

Thats as much i can provide without spoiling the story......maybe i will reveal the main character's name: Joey 'Joe' Kaine Tan.

He is an American-Chinese, American on hs father's side. Lived in America for 8 yrs before migrating to Singapore. Wasn't exactly the most popular kid around, often getting into fights and doing poorly in school. This often resulted in his father giving him a good beating, slowly developing into abuse as his father found it hard to hold a proper job. eventually his father was killed in an accident at a construction site and his life got worst. Only completing secondary school, he had to enter NS and thats when his life got complicated.

Phew, damn, I got carried away. Ah well, the second review then.

Second Story:
In a world quite like ours now, the denizens strangely have not invented advance weaponry despite modern buildings, technology. Instead, they still use sword and shields, spears and axe, and......Mystical Swords!? In this world, there are people who possess swords imbued with powers from the divine beings that brought life to all creation. However, possession of one such sword does not mean you can wield it, the sword chooses its user, and these people are known as simply "Nesohc fo Sdrows" which means chosen people of the swords. However, where there is light, there is dark. Evil creatures known as Xoarks roam the land and threaten the very existance of the world. This story follows the trials and tribulations of 3 youths, the young man who is to destroy creation, the youth who was chosen by the people as savior of the world and the maiden who brings life to flowers and finds herself caught in between.

Main Characters:

Kenichi Taino / Arl Asterio / Shin Maou aka True Demon King / The Destroyer

Owner of the demon sword, Sealed sword of Chaos Destruction: Ma Ha Ou, the heirloom sword of the king of the Xoarks. How he came to be in possession of it is unknown but he clearly has a past he does not wish to reveal. Travelling the world alone, the very sight of the sword has earned him many unfounded ill-treatments from the people of the cities he has visited. Prophecy has told that when the possesor of the demon sword has appeared, the world would be plunged into chaos and despair and only when the saint sword has appeared, its possessor shall cut through the darkness and destroy the cause of all evil. There in lies the reason for which this young man to be feared.

Teresa Claire von Schneider / The Flower Goddess

Owner of the Sword of the 8-Flower Maiden. She works as a free lance dancer for many places and is well known for her abilities in dance. Rumor has it that she once brought a withered garden back to life just through her dancing alone. But like thay said, a beautiful rose belies the fact that it has thorns, this lady is equally deadly with that sword in her hands. Also, behind that gently exterior hides a burning passion for revenge against the one who slaughtered her family like pigs, the one who has a strange mark on his back, yellow eyes and a mystical sword.

Saiyol Renshii / The Savior

Owner of the Sword of Judgemental Light. Since birth, this youth has had to bear the burden of being the "One". In his adolescence, he has had to learn the proper use of a sword, forced to do everything his parents wished, just to be the "One" everyone desired. Slowly, he grew to resent all things evil, especially, The Destroyer, the root of his misery. Eventually, he grew up to have a twisted sense of justice. For the case of people who have done wrong, even minor ones, have been the victims to his extreme belief that all evil doers must be punished or even destroyed for the sake of mankind.

Well, thats that. So, did that get you all wondering what will happen next? Look forward to it!! And please be reminded of the drawing contest! Its still open!

Competition date and reminder

2008-08-09T08:30:00.000-07:00

Hi all! i have found out the date for my competition. its on sunday 1.40pm. i am the ninth guy to go up. the competition grounds is at toa payoh sports hall. to get in though, u need to buy tickets, $10per ticket though i dont recall something like this last year... some new regulation i suppose?

also, a reminder that the contest deadline is 31st august and do spread the word to your friends... especially thouse who love drawing or are also fans of the celestial zone!! Thank you all for you support so far!!

Call to artists!!

2008-08-04T07:35:00.000-07:00

hi all, i am still working on the next chapter amidst my exams so it might take a while, not to mention the wushu competition coming up at toa payoh sports hall from next week monday. i am not sure yet of the day i am competing but i will keep ya all updated. may be if u come and watch, u might see me there!

but i digress, as u might have read in the chat box, one of my juniors has requested that pics be added into the fanfic. i would draw the pics myself, but it would be the end of the world by the time i am done, pray that does not happen, so i have opened this up to all readers who also have confidence in drawing.

but i will onli pick one person to draw for me, so what i will do is hold an art contest. closing date is the 31st of august this month. you have to draw a character, it can be J.Jay, Mira, Ryu or even Narcius aka Trap Master.

hopefully, i would receive a warm response to this. pls send your drawing in jpg format or any other pic format you know of to my email at naruto880@hotmail.com and title it as FanFic Drawing Contest. i will announce the contest in a week's time after the closing date.

Oh, and pls note that if you need more details on the characters so u can draw, feel free to contact me and if you want, meet me during the competition period. i can be found there most of the time. Cheerios ya all and pleasant drawing!

The Celestial Zone.21 FanFic Chpt 14: Gaiden-About 3 months ago Part 2

2008-07-10T04:52:00.000-07:00

Blogger’s Notes: So sorry for the delay... Today is the day my friend, stymr goes to NS... Good luck to him! In view of that, He and I have agreed to have our stories linked so this chapter will be reference to that. Okay, here is the second part of the past between J.Jay and Mira. Hopefully u all won’t find it boring. Right, here goes!

Half a year has past since then. Now, J.Jay and Mira are actively dating. If anyone could call it dating. All they were doing during dates are revision for the final year ‘O’ levels and Mira was tutoring J.Jay.

One day in the teacher’s lounge, J.Jay’s Form teacher, Mrs Lee was sitting around resting before her next lesson. In came the Disciplinary Master with a rather perplexed look.

“Mrs Lee, is something wrong with J.Jay? The entire week he has not been late for school, talked back or gotten into any fights. He didn’t even lift a finger when I gave him a telling off for sitting on the balcony.”

“Well, not only that. His results have even improved by 6 grades and he is even helping the other students in class.” Mrs Lee proudly announced.

A loud crash was heard just outside the door. Another teacher overheard the conversation and dropped his coffee cup. Mrs Lee chuckled. Who would’ve thought that a prefect could subdue and tame the worst student in school?

Before long, the final results of the ‘O’ levels were out and J.Jay eagerly awaited his results. If he could get 12 points, Mira promised to be his girlfriend officially and go out on proper dates with him.

As his turn arrived, J.Jay was so nervous he slipped and fell flat on his butt. Mrs Lee just patiently waited for him and when he was ready, she began:

“When I first got you in my class I have thought to myself, you are better than this but how to make you shine? I have tried many things but it never worked. But you have shown that you are capable of picking yourself up. Congratulations.”

Then she handed J.Jay his certificate. Looking at it, J.Jay’s eyes widen and he was in a shock. Suddenly, he made a whoop in the air and went around the hall in joy, doing all sorts of acrobatics in frenzy.

Spotting Mira in the crowd, he ran over to her. Beaming a smile wider than any that anyone had ever seen before, he raised his certificate to her proudly. Staring at the paper, Mira remained silent.

“I have kept my end of the bargain, now it’s your turn.” J.Jay said.

Without another word, Mira grabbed J.Jay’s head and planted a passionate kiss on his lips. The entire hall fell silent. All eyes were on the two, when they finally parted, the hall erupted with cheers and whistles at the daring display of affection between the unlikely couple.

“That was a present for getting 9 points instead of 12.” Mira explained.

J.Jay, still stunned by the kiss, just stared at her, and then returned the favor with another short kiss. Then the two of them turned to leave for their first proper official date.

Time jump to 3 and a half yrs later…

Now, J.Jay and Mira have been dating for over 3 yrs. While they normally get along, they have quite a few arguments lately. The reason for these arguments are because recently, J.Jay has had been late for several dates and more often than not, he is also bruised as if he has gotten into a fight.

Worried, Mira had been nagging him to tell her what had happened but J.Jay always refused to tell her. Upset that J.Jay seemed to be reverting back to his old character, Mira often chided J.Jay and caused them to start arguing. Though after a few days, they always patched up despite the seriousness of their quarrels.

In reality, J.Jay as you know is an ESPer and recently, he has had a breakthrough in his training after 3 yrs of hard work. Originally stucked at B-class ESP, he was getting anxious about not being able to proceed further and thus, it was affecting his training.

However, as time passed, after his time with Mira, he found his training seemed to be proceeding slowly… Mira’s presence in his life has helped him to calm down and as he became more stable, so did his powers grow at a steady rate until eventually, he just broke through his limits and was on the verge of attaining A-class ESP.

But, such power comes at a price. His breakthrough had caused several unruly ESP organizations to take notice of his presence and wanted J.Jay to join them, willingly or by force. As such, these confrontations led to many ESP fights and resulted in his current state. Afraid that he might get Mira involved if she knew about it, J.Jay remained quiet at the expense of their recent quarrels.

Unbeknownst to him though, Mira was aware of the whole situation. She however remained silent because she hoped J.Jay would tell her instead of her revealing she had known along. Why? That’s because Mira herself was an ESPer.

The very moment J.Jay achieved his breakthrough, she had realized that her boyfriend was also someone like her, an ESPer. From then on, she kept an eye on him to make sure he was alright. For she had sensed that despite his strong potential, J.Jay’s powers were still a far cry from hers, she being an A-class ESPer, no matter how new she was to being an A-class.

Of course, an interesting fact to note is that Mira is from a long line of ESPers. Not to mention that they are the so called “Pure Breed” ESPers. The whole family is made up of ESPers. They believed in inter-breeding so every member must start a family with an ESPer to make sure the bloodline remains pure so as to ensure each generation will produce offspring much more powerful than the predecessors.

As such, Mira knows that J.Jay is in danger of being targeted by ESPers more powerful than him now that they know that he has the potential to become extremely powerful. So Mira took on the role as a silent angel watching J.Jay’s back in the dark.

Then one night, the 2 of them decided to go into a pub for a drink and have fun. After a while, J.Jay left Mira alone to visit the washroom. All by herself, Mira sat patiently awaiting his return when a young man with broad shoulders, standing at 1.77m tall, crowned with thick wavy natural jet black hair carefully mused and a boyishly handsome face approached her from a table a short distance away.

“Hey Babe,” he said.

Turning to face him, Mira examined this stranger and scoffed at his display of flirtatiousness. Nevertheless, it’s beneath her to ignore someone who has addressed her so she just gave him a curt nod of the head.

Taking it as a good sign, the stranger occupied J.Jay’s sit without asking and began to flirt with Mira. Though annoyed at the man’s behavior, Mira tried to ignore him. When the man saw that Mira was not responsive to his approaches, he tried something different.

“Ok, its seems like you are a tough nut to crack so I am going to play a guessing game with you.” He said confidently. “The punishment is 1 full glass of tiger beer. The one who reaches 10 glasses loses. If I lose, I will leave you alone. But if I win, you have to go on a week’s date with me.”

Thoroughly irritated now, Mira accepted the challenge and began playing with the stranger. I will not describe the game as it extremely tedious so I will just jump to the score board. Before she knew it, Mira had 7 glasses on her side and the stranger only had 4 glasses. By then, Mira was feeling a little tipsy and is starting to make mistakes.

The stranger grinned widely as he knew he was about to win and that he would have another beautiful girl swooning for him soon. That very thought made his heart race and he was eager to finish the game when suddenly……..

“Get away from my girl, punk ass.” J.Jay hollered and stared at him.

The stranger looked up, grinning amiably and lifting up his hands in a surrendering gesture,

“Hey man, be nice. You were out on the dance floor, dude. I’m just entertaining a lonely girl, that’s all. No harm done.”

“That doesn’t give you the right to play with my girl, punk. Wise up, or you’ll get hurt.” J.Jay growled his face a thunder cloud.

Smiling, Ruby looked at J.Jay and slowly backed away. Moving back to his circle of friends who came with him, they cheered him, and J.Jay glared at them all the way. Turning back to Mira, he sat down.

“What the hell did you think you were doing!?” He hollered.

Mira was taken back, J.Jay’s reaction was not what she had expected.

“Hey, I was only trying to get rid of him okay? He was flirting with me and playing that game was the fastest way to make him get lost!”

J.Jay could not accept that. Pangs of jealousy rose in him the moment he saw Mira with another man on his seat and flirting with her.

“That’s not good enough Mira! You could have ignored him and waited for me to get back! Why didn’t you think of that!?”

“What!? You self-centered jerk! How can you say that? I did it because I am true to you and yet you…..”

Mira was furious. How could J.Jay be so insensitive? Sure, granted anyone would feel jealous but this is absurd. After all, they have been dating for almost 4 yrs now. Well, J.Jay actually regretted what he had just said but his pride as a man would not allow him to apologize.

“Whatever!! After this drink, we are going home, whether you like it or not!”

“You…..! Argh!! I can’t believe you!” Mira just sat there pouting.

Unknown to them, the stranger just now was looking in their direction. Mira suddenly felt as if something was not right but she couldn’t place what. Beside her, J.Jay gave a jump as if something had poked him.

“Hey! I changed my mind. Let me have the girl. After all, you suck, big time.” The stranger called out gleefully.

J.Jay whipped around to face him, glaring as if his stare could kill. Taunting him, the stranger turned and ran off. Growling, J.Jay gave chase and that was when Mira realized, that was what she felt out of place.

“J.Jay! Wait!! Don’t go after him…..!” Mira cried. But it was too late…..

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 13: Gaiden-About 3 months ago Part 1

2008-05-31T01:32:00.000-07:00

Blogger’s Notes: Hi hi everyone! Very long overdue update, I apologies again. But for this update, I will be writing a chapter detailing more about Jay and Mira’s relation ship with each other. Now read on!

“Mira!! I want answers and you are going to give them to me!” J.Jay shouted, his thought filled with rage. But now let us move back to approximately 4 yrs and 3 months ago……

J.Jay was still in a Neighborhood Secondary School, Deyi Secondary School. He was, so to speak your typical ‘Ah Beng’, or gangster character doing his 5^th year in sch instead of the usual 4 years other students do because of his grades and attitude.

It was the start of the new school year and already J.Jay had landed himself in trouble. Some twit from another school pissed him off and they got into a fight. Although J.Jay had ESP, he had been properly disciplined by Achilles never to use his ESP against a normal person, therefore, he would often resort to physical violence.

Anyway, needless to say, J.Jay creamed the whole group despite their overwhelming numbers compared to him and was walking off triumphantly when he saw that the whole scene was witnessed by 2 girls from his school.

“Shit!” he thought to himself. Stomping towards the girls so menacingly, that one of the girls was practically shaking in her skirt. Staring at them with that pair of striking blue eyes that seemed to pierce through the girls.

“You 2 bitches didn’t see anything right!?” he shouted at them, hoping to silence them.

“Yes, Yes!! We didn’t see anything!!” one of them screamed. When she saw that her friend did not speak up, “Tell him Mira! Tell him you did not see anything!” she urged. Obviously, J.Jay’s reputation in school is really bad and either Mira was too stunned or just plain dumb to keep silent.

However, J.Jay was losing patience and disregarding that the other party was a girl, grabbed her by the cuff of her uniform and lifted her off the ground. Promptly, Mira raised her right hand and soundly gave J.Jay a tight slap across the cheek that seemed to echo throughout the entire HDB flat.

Stunned, J.Jay dropped Mira of which, she jumped. So lightly she jumped, as if she were a feather, J.Jay just stared mesmerized and was rewarded with a double foot kick right in the face. By then, Mira’s friend had already fainted with shock.

Staring straight at Mira, J.Jay just sat on the floor, suddenly very weak in the knees. He had never in his life been hit by a girl this hard before nor had he felt this way about a girl. Sure, he had flirted with a few girls in the past but never had they left such a lasting impression on him.

“Are you quite finished with your barbarism?” Mira asked.

Looking at Mira, J.Jay merely nodded.

“Good, now get over here and help me with Claire.” she ordered.

Meekly, J.Jay walked over and lifted Claire up on his shoulder and started walking to school with Mira. Halfway, Claire woke up and made a din about being carried on the back of the most notorious boy in school.

When they reached the school gate, the Disciplinary Master was there to greet them. After all, they were late and he would not miss a chance to punish J.Jay again and again.

“Well, what do we have here? The Head and Vice-Head prefect are late for school along the scum of society.” He scorned.

“I am sorry, sir but could you please excuse us this once? Some hooligans from another school harassed us but J.Jay happened to be passing by and helped us out.” Mira lied.

“Really?” the Disciplinary Master was doubtful, but knowing that Mira was well known for being honest, he decided to let it slide just this once.

“Fine then, head to class. J.Jay, I want you to go to the infirmary at once to get cleaned up. Tell them you were sent by me to avoid suspicion.” Disciplinary Master dismissed them and went on his way.

The next day, J.Jay reached school especially early and went to Mira’s class to look for her. This caused quite an uproar, the most unruly boy in the school, looking for the most refined girl in school? Sounds like some ludicrous remake of beauty and the beast.

“What is it? I don’t suppose u have come to apologies for yesterday’s behavior?” Mira asked.

“No- I mean, yes, I would like to apologize and umm…” J.Jay stammered, clearly uneasy about the situation and Mira’s bluntness with him.

Amused, Mira just looked at him intently and kept quiet. Suddenly, J.Jay pushed a note with something folded inside into her hands and just ran off. Staring at his back, she opened the note and looked at its content curiously.

Inside, the note only stated that he wanted to hear her reply at the HDB block where they met yesterday and attached is a laminated 4-leafed clover and a picture of a boy and girl holding hands inside a heart shape.

Blushing, she turned around and saw that her entire class was staring at her, straining to see the content of the note. Ignoring them, she went on as if nothing happened. That day, she refused to go and see J.Jay.

But day after day, J.Jay came to her and gave her the same note, only without the 4-leafed clover. Finally, she decide to take a look. That afternoon, she went to the void deck and peeked over the corner and saw J.Jay waiting there. Feeling her heart started to pound extremely fast, Mira turned and left the place.

A few days later, after her CCA practice, Mira headed home. Passing by that void deck, she peeked over and to her utter surprise, J.Jay was still there! Finally making up her mind, Mira tidied herself up to go and see him when she heard familiar voices.

Looking over, she saw the same group of hooligans that J.Jay beat up a while ago. Only this time, they were at least twice as large a group and armed with baseball bats.

“Pay back time you ass!!” they shouted.

Mira waited to see how J.Jay would react.

J.Jay did not say a word or make a move. Just sitting there.

Seeing him motionless, the whole gang set themselves on him, bludgeoning and raining blows on him. It went on for a while and finally, Mira could not stand by any longer. She walked from her cover and gave the nearest guy a jump kick on the back of the head.

Stunned, the gang stared at the intruder. Surprised it’s a girl, they froze on the spot. Taking the opening, Mira pounced forward and using and interesting blend of karate, taekwondo and judo, beat off the gang.

Going over to J.Jay, she checked him and saw that he was smiling.

“Hi there. What a sight for sore eyes huh?” he quietly said.

“You idiot, why did you just stay there like complete dummy?” Mira asked.

“I promised myself not to get into another fight until I hear your answer.” J.Jay replied.

At that moment, Mira realized that even though he is notorious for being rude and unruly, he actually has another side to himself. People are so judgmental by looks, they overlook the real person inside. Mira felt so stupid for making that mistake herself. Deep within, she felt a weird sensation coming from her heart.

For some reason, Mira felt that if she was with J.Jay, she would feel complete, as if at that moment, he had become a part of her. It was at that moment, the 2 of them would become closely entwined in their fates.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 12 : Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon! The showdown between Dolls and Dragons

2008-04-28T03:58:00.000-07:00

Blogger’s Notes: Yes! I am finally able to update. Ryu makes his first official debut in this chapter hope u will enjoy it. It may be tough for readers who have no prior knowledge to yu gi oh so I apologize before hand. And for the fans of Blues eyes white dragon, feast on the awesome might of the dragons!! Whahahaha! To the chapter then!

Knocked almost senseless by Burstinatrix, Ryu shook his head to clear it. Shit, I am too far from J.Jay! He thought. Just then, Burstinatrix had already closed in and on the attack. Prepared this time, Ryu managed to grab her out stretched arm and flipped her over with a judo throw.

Sensing someone catching up from behind, Ryu quickly ran for cover among the trees nearby. Sneaking a glance from behind a tree while taking out his deck, Ryu saw that the masked man had arrived. Anxiously, knowing that his cover would be blown very soon, Ryu fumbled through his deck for THAT card.

“What may I ask are you looking for? Hmmm?” said a cold voice from behind the tree.

Ryu froze in shock, unable to move. Suddenly, the tree behind him blew up, sending him sprawling across the floor. Recovering with a roll, Ryu countered by picking a card…..from his empty hand!?

Wide eyed, Ryu stared at his palm then saw that his cards had been scattered in the explosion. Doll Master was slowly making his way towards Ryu, a wide grin on his face, behind him Burstinatrix followed.

Keeping his eyes fixed on them, Ryu grabbed a few cards from beneath his feet and quickly glanced at them. He winced. Not one of them could be used……trying again, he picked up a few more cards. By then his opponents were less then a metre from him.

Glancing, he felt slight relief. Finally, something I can use! Concentrating hard, he started to glow. Amused at what Ryu is doing, Doll Master stopped in his tracks and waited. Flashing the card to them, something flew out and was headed straight for Doll Master.

Jumping back, Doll Master easily avoided the attack and took a good look at what attempted to assault him. Before his very eyes, a tiny dragon the size of a child was flying about.

“Baby Dragon! Baby Flame!!” Ryu shouted.

Turning his head, Doll Master was caught off guard by Ryu’s shout and did not notice the dragon open its mouth and fired a ball of flame at him. Just before Doll Master got hit, Burstinatrix quickly fired an energy shot that extinguished the flame.

“Be careful You idiot!” she shouted.

Ryu took the moment that they were unfocused and quickly scanned the floor for THAT card. Seeing it on the floor just next to Doll Master’s foot, he pounced on it like a wild animal and grabbed Doll Master’s leg causing him to fall on his face.

Rolling away, Ryu stood and concentrated again. As Burstinatrix attempted to attack him, she found herself slamming into something big. Stepping back, she gave a quick gasp as she saw a giant white dragon towering over her.

Swinging its massive tail, the dragon swept Burstinatrix off her feet and a few metres away. Just then, Doll Master had gotten back on his feet and saw the giant dragon.

“Well, I must say this is quite impressive!” he praised.

“Burst Stream of Destruction!!” Ryu cried.

The dragon opened its jaws and a giant ball of energy formed. Doll Master could practically feel the energy crackling in the air as this ball was fired in a large stream, straight at him. Any normal ESPer would had died from such an attack.

If Doll Master were an normal ESPer……as the smoke cleared, Ryu saw Doll Master standing there, unscathed at all.

“No way…… That was a full powered Burst Stream……” Ryu said.

“True, but even so, with a barrier strong enough, I can protect myself.” Doll Master replied.

Raising his arms, string-like things appeared from his fingers and at the end of each of these string things started to grow a mass of disgusting looking goo that slowly took form. Before long, Doll Master was surrounded by 10 humanoid shapes that had masks on their faces.

“I must say, you have an interesting concept of materializing dragons from your imagination. Whereas I, take delight in manipulating bodies like dolls.” Doll Master commented.

“So, you are going to say it’s a Puppet Fight huh?” Ryu finished.

“Indeed. Dolls versus Dragon. Please make it interesting…” Doll Master said.

“Don’t regret it then!” Ryu shouted, his white dragon making the first move by firing a shot at Doll Master.

Reacting in kind, with a flick of his finger, a Doll jumped into the path of the ball and took the brunt of the attack, exploding, reforming moments later. Flicking another finger, another Doll leapt towards Ryu which was promptly kicked in the gut by Ryu.

Before long, the entire battle was a mess, Ryu beating the crap out of Dolls which gets up relentlessly, the dragon firing balls of energy and Dolls jumping in the way. However, Doll Master was obviously at the advantage. He had not even moved a step since the fight began, only his fingers.

Panting, Ryu knew the fight was against him. It wont be long before he gets beat down by the overwhelming forces of Doll Master. Thinking hard, he jumped out of the mob of Dolls and landed on the dragon’s back.

Looking around, he searched for something. Finally finding it, he soared away from Doll Master. Not wanting to lose this chance, Doll Master gave chase, not realizing that by now, Burstinatrix should have caught up and should be assisting him as per planned.

Where is she now? Sitting on a tree branch watching the whole fiasco.

As Doll Master gave chase, he saw that Ryu seemed to land at certain areas and take off again after a while. Knowing that Ryu might be up to something, he braced himself for what ever he could throw.

However, Doll Master was not too worried as he believed that this white dragon was Ryu’s strongest fighting force. Finally, Ryu landed and waited for Doll Master to catch up. Knowing that Ryu was ready to finish things once and for all, Doll Master readied himself.

“Finally giving up boy? After all, controlling 1 dragon is not enough. In such a fight, the one who controls more puppets wins. And I clearly am superior to you.” He said.

“Is that so? Doll Master was it? You said before this fight that it was Dolls versus Dragon, what makes you so sure that I can only control 1 dragon at a time?” Ryu retorted.

Doll Master’s eyes widen. Impossible, did I make a mistake? No, it must be a hoax!

Seeing disbelief in Doll Master’s eyes, Ryu merely scoffed.

“Seeing is believing like they always say. Take a good look then!” raising his hand, there were 2 more Blue Eyes White Dragon cards and flashing, 2 more dragons appeared bringing the total dragon count to 3!

3 dragons! 1 Blues Eyes has so much power, now there are 3! Incredible!

“No way, I have seen you in action before, there is no way you could control 3 at a time!” Doll Master exclaimed.

“Before, yes you are right. But thanks to J.Jay, I have made leaps and bounds in my mastery and can control 3 dragons at ease!”

“Ha!! I can handle 1 dragon without breaking a sweat, I can definitely handle 3!” Doll Master cried.

“True, but there is a special trick to Blue Eyes White Dragons. Individually they are powerful, but combined, I can unleash a new power from them at once!” Ryu said.

Making swirling motions with his hand, the bodies of the dragons started to distort and warp towards the center of the swirl. Appearing out of the distortions, a Blue Eyes White Dragon with 3 heads!!

“Blue Eyes Ultimate Dragon! The amalgamation of 3 Blue Eyes! With this, its firepower is exponentially increased, for a total of 9X its normal firepower!” Ryu thrusted his hand forward, signaling the dragon to attack.

A bright flash followed by a humongous beam flew towards Doll Master. Mustering all his strength, he quickly sent all his Dolls to cover him. If he can survive this attack, victory would be his.

Fueled by this thought, he stood firm against the impact, resulting in a draw, the attack not getting through, but he lost all his Dolls at the same time. Laughing to himself, he used his remaining energy to create 2 more Dolls, his limit, to attack Ryu.

Through the smoke, Ryu was exhausted but he knew that Doll Master was going to make an attack and he could not gather enough ESP to prepare another shot. With whatever was left, he quickly split Blues Eyes Ultimate Dragon back to 3 Blue Eyes White Dragons and sent them through the smoke.

Doll Master was completely unprepared for the arrival of 3 Blue Eyes White Dragons from the veil of smoke and was about to be defeated when suddenly, the dragons vanished. It was as if they were never there at all.

The smoke cleared and Doll Master saw Ryu sitting on the ground, panting. Ryu had run out of ESP at that critical juncture!

“I have to admit, you are a magnificent fighter. But my job is to finish you off. Pity really.” Doll Master lamented about to finish Ryu off when he was blasted from behind.

Roaring in pain, he turned and saw Burstinatrix with her hand raised and directed at him.

“Woman! What do you think you are doing!” he roared.

“Isn’t it obvious? I am the one you are looking for.” She simply replied.

“The Sorceress…” Doll Master said in realization. They had been tricked by this woman.

“That’s right. Now to finish you off for all you misdeeds!” She said.

But before she could make the finishing move…

“MIRA!!!!!!!”

She turned at the shout, giving Doll Master the chance to escape. Turning back, Mira saw that her quarry had escaped. Cursing to herself, she prepared for the next problem on the way. Finally finding his friend, J.Jay faced Mira.

“Mira! I want answers and You are going to give them to me!!” he screamed.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 11 : I Want Answers

2008-04-20T07:55:00.000-07:00

Blogger’s Notes: Right now, finally, an update! Bet you were all waiting to murder me for my tardiness, but now u cant cause I am now back with the next chpt! On another note, I have a friend who has also written another fanfic for the celestial zone and J.Jay has a guest role in it so pls every one, follow this link to his blog and read away! And he updates more regularly than I too. Now, to the chapter!

“Damn it! Why are you here!” screamed J.Jay.

“What!? You know this person?” Ryu looked at J.Jay in surprise.

Without another word, Burstinatrix snapped out her hand and Ryu felt an incredible force slam into him and pushed him far from J.Jay. Chasing Ryu relentlessly, Burstinatrix fired burst after burst of energy at Ryu until they were but shadows in the distance.

“What all you waiting for!! Finish the boy off!!” Doll Master roared at his subordinates as he turned to assist Burstinatrix.

Snapping out of the shock they had at J.Jay’s outburst, the remaining 3 masters circled J.Jay slowly with caution. Seeing J.Jay sitting on the floor stunned and listless, Trap Master decided to make the first move.

Jumping forward, he gave a kick at J.Jay’s face. Nothing happened. J.Jay just sat there while Trap Master pounded away on him.

“What the--? This is going to be soo easy!” Trap Master cried out in surprise and arrogance.

“Careful Narcius, you don’t know what he may be planning…” Mode Master said.

“Look at him Kirielle! He is just another dumb punching bag!” Trap Master continued pounding away.

Psycho Master merely stood by assessing the situation. J.Jay’s reaction puzzled him greatly and he could not shake off an uneasy feeling within him. Thinking hard for a moment, he called out to Trap Master.

“Narcius, what was that woman wearing when she fought you?”

“Huh? I already told you, dressed all in black.” Trap Master called back.

“Think harder, though thinking has never been your forte, she must had been wearing something else.” Psycho Master said irritatedly.

Thinking for a moment, Trap Master shouted.

“Oh yeah! She was also wearing some gold bracelet thingy consisting of 2 rings!”

“2 rings…Gold bracelet…” Psycho Master was in deep thought… Then suddenly…

“Oh No!! Narcius! Kirielle! Forget the boy! Our Lord is in danger!”

“What!?” Trap Master and Mode Master exclaimed.

“That Burstinatrix, she IS the Sorceress! She plans to team up with that Dragon Boy to defeat our Lord!” Psycho Master turned to his Master’s direction. Trap Master and Mode Master did the same.

However before they could move, they felt a huge energy surge behind them and turned around. J.Jay was standing there in a blaze of gold energy.

“I need to speak to her! And you are not getting in my way!” he screamed at them.

Without wasting time, Psycho Master fired a psychic blast at J.Jay which seemingly bounced harmlessly off him. Then J.Jay was gone. The 3 Masters scanned the immediate area anxiously but could not locate him.

Suddenly, Trap Master felt flat on his face as something smashed onto the back of his head. Whipping around, he saw J.Jay standing right behind him cracking his fists.

“Before I forget…It’s pay back time!!” he shouted as he started bashing Trap Master like some crazed brawler.

“Narcius!!” Mode Master screamed as she changed her form and turned into Elisandro.

Raising her fingers, she fired a Death Star Beam right at J.Jay. Without even looking up, the sign of Aries appeared and the all too familiar transparent wall appeared and reflected the attack back at Mode Master.

In a flash, Psycho Master had teleported in front of Mode Master and erected his own psychic barrier and dissipated the energy of the beam.

“Careful Kirielle, he has beaten Elisandro before and he is even stronger now!” Psycho Master chided.

“I know, but Narcius…!” Mode Master argued

“I am on it already!” Psycho Master concentrated and lifted J.Jay high into the air.

“Now! Kirielle!” he shouted.

Quickly, Mode Master then changed into another man that J.Jay had never seen before and before his very eyes, grew to the size of a tree and smacked him real hard with a fist. Slamming onto the floor, J.Jay tried to recover but his legs could not move.

Taking the chance, Mode Master slammed into J.Jay several more times before finally gripping J.Jay’s legs and threw him onto a wall.

Gasping for air, J.Jay tried to run as he saw Mode Master charging towards him again in an attempt to crush him once and for all. Shit, he thought, My legs cant move! But my upper body can. Only way to handle this is to use…..

Markings started appearing on J.Jay’s body as he started to glow gold.

“Whatever you are up too, its too late!!!!” Mode Master screamed.

Keeping silent, J.Jay merely crossed his arms and closed his eyes. Just as Mode Master was about to crush him and had come within arms length, J.Jay snapped his eyes open and flung his arms out and an energy wave in the shape of a giant bull appeared.

“Great Horn!!!” he shouted as the energy wave smashed into Mode Master and sent her flying through the air.

Just before she touched the ground, Mode Master had fallen unconscious, changing back to her real form.

“Kirielle!!” Psycho Master shouted, losing focus for a moment.

Just as Psycho Master got distracted, J.Jay found that he could move again. Knowing that he might not get another chance like this again, he attempted an attack at Psycho Master. Sensing danger behind him, Psycho Master quickly turned around and froze J.Jay in place again just as J.Jay raised his finger at him.

“Shit!! You F!@king coward! Face me without that lame technique of yours!” J.Jay cursed.

Walking up to J.Jay, Psycho Master gave J.Jay a tight slap to the face. Face turning red in humiliation and the spot on his cheek burning, J.Jay stared at Psycho Master, as if hoping he could kill on sight.

Unnerved by such sharpness in the eyes of a youngster, Psycho Master rewarded J.Jay with several more slaps.

“Time to finish you off boy…” Psycho Master said as he made a crushing action with his fist. J.Jay could feel something crushing him and soon he was turning purple.

“Not if I finish you off first 3-tailed pig!!” J.Jay shouted with his final breath and as Psycho Master finally clenched his fist, his own face turned pale.

Looking down on his body, all Psycho Master saw was a tiny red wound but the pain was almost unbearable. Looking back at J.Jay’s face, he saw another constellation sign. Before he could say anything, J.Jay replied.

“Scorpio, I put my finger up on purpose cause I knew I might get caught again.”

Silently, Psycho Master cursed his own carelessness.

“You have only gotten a taste of Scarlet Needle, there are still 13 more to go.” J.Jay said as his outstretched fingernail grew to form what looked like a crimson sting on a scorpion.

Before Psycho Master could react, he felt another prick followed by an excruciating pain much worst than the first one. With that much pain, he lost his hold on J.Jay. Psycho Master had lost this fight.

“10 more….” J.Jay counted as he fired 2 more shots at Psycho Master.

Letting out a blood curdling scream, Psycho Master fell unconscious on the floor.

“Tch, only four shots and he already cannot take it. Cant blame him though, with each shot, the pain increases and its even more unbearable if fired in succession.” J.Jay commented as he turned in Doll Master’s direction and started running as fast as his exhausted body could take him.

“I want answers and YOU are going to give it to me!” he growled to himself.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 10: The Masters and.....Why are you here!?

2008-04-10T09:41:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Yay!!! It's Chpt 10 already. Hurray to me!! Eh-hem, pardon me, I am going abit nuts now. School is starting soon and that means I may not be able to update as regularly as I would like. Just thinking about it is driving me crazy! But that's enough of me. The important things in the chapter now. The mysterious ESPer who joined the grp of what-is Masters is about to make her first actual appearance. Has anyone guessed who she is? A few of my frens guessed Mayana or Bao-er but they are all wrong! Hee hee, read on to find out.

Staring through their binoculars, Doll Master saw the 2 friends walking home. Turning his head, he saw the same look of surprise on the female and the other person with 3 pony-tails.

"What the hell is Narcius doing!? I gave him the order to finish them off!" Doll Master bellowed.

"What should we do now, Doll Master?" the female asked.

"Kirielle, I want you to go and bring Narcius back immediately!" Doll Master ordered.

"As you wish my lord." Kirielle answered, bowing before she turn and left the roof.

"What now, Doll Master? Should I finish them off?" the man with the pony-tails asked.

"No! Do not be rash, for all we know, Narcius was probably defeated by them. We will watch for now." Doll master cautioned.

Nodding his head, the man turned back to watch the 2 friends as the entered their apartment. Outside, The Sorceress looked down at the unconscious Trap Master and gave a start as she sensed another ESPer approaching.

With a flick of her wrist, she extinguished the last of the flames crackling around the area and quickly left the scene, confident that she had not left any tracks. A minute later Kirielle appeared looking around for Narcius.

When she saw him lying on the floor, she quickly ran to his side. Finding him alive, she gave a great sigh of relief and tried to call to him while shaking his body.

"Narcius, Narcius!! Wake up!! Get up, you Porcupine Head!!" Kirielle screamed at him. Seeing Narcius's head twitch at the mention of porcupine head, Kirielle went on:

"Wake Porcupine Head! Porcupine Head~~ Oh Porcu--"

Narcius jumped awake in a blaze of fury

"I TOLD YOU, STOP CALLING ME POR-CU-PINE HEAD!!!!!!!!" he roared and suddenly stopped.

Looking at Kirielle in surprise, he said:

"Kirielle, what are you doing here? Where is that bitch!?"

Eyes narrowed, Kirielle asked:

"What bitch? There is no other woman here but me."

"There was this bitch who beat the snort outta me. She was protecting those 2 losers." Narcius explained.

"I see. We'd better get you back and tell this to our master." Kirielle said, offering a hand to Narcius which he accepted willingly.

Back on the roof top when Narcius had returned, Doll Master was deep in thought as he brought in this new and unexpected factor into the scenario.

"Indeed, this sorceress who prove difficult to handle if we do not stop her." Doll Master comment.

"Allow me to try and find her whereabouts my lord, then we will crush her with our combined strength!" the man with the 3 pony-tails said.

"Very well, Darwyn. But remember, only seek her location, do not engage." Doll Master consented.

Bowing, Darwyn disappeared in a flash. Turning around, Doll Master inspected Narcius's wounds.

"You were careless Narcius. Falling into your own trap and letting your opponent make a fool of you." Doll Master said.

Wincing in embarrassment, Narcius replied:

"Forgive me my lord. It will not happen again, I promise!"

"See that it won't. I expect nothing less from you Narcius, or any of you for that matter." Doll Master said.

"Yes, my lord!!" Kirielle and Narcius replied.

Moments after he had disappeared from the rooftop, Darwyn appeared at the scene of the fight. Inspecting the nearby vicinity for any clues, Darwyn concluded that this person is extremely cautious. She had not left a single trace of evidence that could give her away.

Smiling to himself, Darwyn close his eyes. Just because there are no tracks, does not mean that there is no way to track a person. Especially when the person being tracked is an ESPer. Concentrating hard, Darwyn constructed a field of psychic energy around the area.

To the naked eye, nothing has changed. However, to Darwyn, any residue of ESP would be separated to colors and visible to him. Scanning around, Darwyn saw the familiar trail of Narcius's ESP and finally, that of the sorceress.

Although Darwyn had picked up the trail of ESP, it stops abruptly as it leaves the area. Clever woman, Darwyn thought to himself, but I am not out of tricks yet. Closing his eyes again, Darwyn started to glow.

After a few minutes of silence, Darwyn opened his eyes and teleported from the scene. In a flash, he appeared before the rest. Standing up after tending to Narcius's wounds, Doll Master turned to face him.

"Well?" he asked.

"I am sorry my lord. This woman is very cautious and had wiped out what ever traces I could find." Darwyn apologised. Doll Master remained silent, knowing that Darwyn had more to report.

"However, I was able to attune myself to the frequency of her ESP. Now as long as she is using her powers or even exuding any hint of ESP, I should be able to track her down." Darwyn finshed.

"Well done Darwyn. Now we must rest and be fresh for the morn." Doll Master said.

Slowly, one by one, they fell into slumber...

The next day, J.Jay woke up early and decided to take an early morning jog through the park. Changing into his running gear, he left the sleeping Ryu behind and started running. As he was running by the area they were training at just the night before, he stopped in surprise.

All around the area was evidence of a fight. Not just any fight, but that between ESPers. Examining the area, he concluded that the fight occurred just recently, probably after they had left. Thinking fast, J.Jay decided to cut short his jog and return home.

Just as he got back, Ryu appeared from the kitchen.

"Just nice, breakfast is almost done." he said.

"Quickly finish it. We may have a problem." J.Jay quickly replied.

Seeing J.Jay so serious, Ryu quickly finished what he was doing and came out.

"What's up? You look like you have seen a ghost." he asked.

"I think we are being watched." J.Jay said.

"What!? Are you sure?" Ryu exclaimed.

"There were signs of an ESP fight where we were last night. Probably just after we had left." J.Jay said.

"So, maybe its just 2 other ESPers duking it out...but you may have a point. We might really be being watched." Ryu tried to argue back but found nothing to say.

"I think we had better move in a pair from now on. Here, let me give you the details." J.Jay told Ryu after thinking for a moment.

From then on, they started moving in pairs. Not too close but not too far either, just enough for each other to rush and help the other person in need. Unknown to them, their watchers were far more experience in tracking.

"Well, one of them must be a rather perceptive. They have already discovered our stake out." Doll Master commented, rather amused.

"However, I do not believe that they know that we have numbers by our side." Darwyn said.

"Yes, but as the situation goes.....Narcius, how are your wounds?" Doll Master asked.

"Gimme 1 more day my lord. I will be fine then." Narcius answered, flexing his body abit to test his wounds.

"Very well, let us strategize how to surround them." Doll Master said.

"You haven't forgotten about me have you?" a voice called from the roof entrance.

"Ah, there you are. Burstinatrix, you have arrived just at the right moment. Please, join our planning meet." Doll Master invited.

"Of course I will, after all, Tai Yi did send me to assist." Burstinatrix haughtily replied.

"What!? Why do we need some bitch who does nothing to join our planning!?" Narcius cried out in horror.

"Well, Porcupine-Head, I believe I am stronger than you." Burstinatrix replied.

"Why you...Don't you call me Por--" Narcius began when he was interrupted by Doll Master who grew what looked like wings and exuded a great wave of ESP that practically silenced the entire roof. Everyone, even Burstinatrix looked taken back.

"CAN WE PLEASE BEGIN AND STOP THIS NONSENSE.....?" Doll Master said in an ominously low voice.

When he was met with silence, he nodded and started to explain what he had planned.

The very next day, as J.Jay and Ryu were returning home from NYP, he felt someone following him. Sending a signal to Ryu who in turn sent him a similar signal, J.Jay pick up his pace and moved swiftly to an area with as few obstacles as possible.

Knowing that his opponent or opponents were one step ahead of him, he tried to make use of the terrain by moving to an area where they could not easily corner him. Therefore, he opted for a wide open field that was deserted at the moment.

There he waited for his adversary to arrive. Looking around, he found that he was up against not 1, not 2 but 4 different ESPers. To make matters worse, he could sense that they had 'A' if not high class 'B' level powers.

"You should have joined 'Hermes' when they offered to you boy." Doll Master said.

"And you are.....?" J.Jay said, trying to stall for time while waiting for Ryu to arrive for their surprise attack on the group.

"Stalling for time boy? No matter, I am Doll Master, and these are my subordinates, Psycho Master, Mode Master and Trap Master." Doll Master casually replied, not particularly worried that J.Jay may have something up his sleeve.

Realizing that this opponent is too tough, J.Jay tried to send a signal to Ryu to inform him to stay away from the area when there was an explosion and a loud bang from behind his enemies. Ryu was seen soaring through the air and another person was following him.

Using the Faculty of Channels to aid him, J.Jay leaped through the air and caught Ryu. Landing on the ground, Ryu quickly shook his head to clear it and scanned the area.

"Oh.....Shit." he said.

"I know...Looks like its gonna be tough to fight our way through." J.Jay nodded.

"Well done Burstinatrix. Quite impressive, leading the boy to Trap Master's traps and then adding your own attack to it." Doll Master congratulated.

The mysterious attacker stood closer and J.Jay got a better view of the person. She was wearing a black coat with a hood that covered her face, boot heels and riding gloves.

"Of course, neither I or you would expect any less." she said.

J.Jay's eyes widen in horror. There is no way, he thought, No way it is her... Then he looked at Burstinatrix's right wrist. There, resting nicely on her wrist was a bracelet with 2 golden rings on them. J.Jay felt his knees grow weak and give way.

".....Damn it you, you...Why the Hell are you here....!?" J.Jay screamed at Burstinatrix.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 9: Mira Lelaine ; The Sorceress

2008-04-03T06:14:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Well then. Hope you all enjoy what I have written so far. As some of u might have noted, its already the 3-4 book of the celestial zone series. A far cry from book 25 which I just bought like 4-5 days ago. And you all know what? I am bursting with inspiration to write more about J.Jay and his development from Achilles death. Surely you all know that it is a very important part of my plot line right? Oooops, I seem to have written too much, on to the story!

"Ermm, just who is she?" Ryu asked, staring at J.Jay.

"You mean he never told you? I'm his......" the woman started.

"Did you want something or not?" J.Jay interrupted, clearly upset.

"You could always let me finish..." the woman stated matter-of-factly. When J.Jay just stared straight at her, she shrugged.

"Fine, I tried to visit your apartment but your landlord told me he kicked you out for late rent."

"So...? That's not why you are here is it?" J.Jay said.

"No, I missed you. And I was worried about you." the woman replied.

"Yeah well, I don't and can you please leave? Just the sight of you makes me sick!" J.Jay shouted and pushed his way pass the woman and stormed into the apartment.

"J.Jay....." Ryu followed behind and stopped when the woman grabbed his hand.

"Forget it. He is always like that. Never truthful about his feelings. Let him cool down." she said.

"I don't get it, just who are you and what's your relationship with J.Jay." Ryu asked.

"If he has not told you, then I am not at liberty to tell you either. I am Mira by the way, Mira Lelaine. I really must get going." the woman answered.

"Wait, at least give me an idea of why he is so mad at you." Ryu said.

"All I can say is that I hurt him, I hurt him real bad...Good Day." the woman turned and walked off.

Staring at her back, Ryu went back into the apartment and shut the door.

On the roof top of the opposite HDB flat, there was a group strange people who were watching the condominium. They seemed to be arguing amongst them selves.

"I say we all charge in and beat the crap out of those 2 cocky brats." one of them who sported punk hair said.

"Sure, Porcupine-head! In case you didn't notice, They beat the shit out of Elisandro and the twins!" another, a woman retorted.

"DON'T CALL ME PORCUPINE-HEAD!!" the first one shouted.

"Enough! I want the 2 of you to stop acting like little children." one with 3 short pony-tails said.

"Can you all be quiet as we watch our target?" the last of them with a mask on his face asked.

Immediately, the whole roof went silent. It was so silent, that one could even hear the sweat dripping from their faces. Suddenly, the masked one said:

"When will you stop looking from afar, Chris the Magician?"

Stepping forward from behind a wall, a man with a mustache and a long ponytail laughed.

"Not bad, Rue..."

"Do not ever call me by that name Chris. I am Doll Master." Doll Master interrupted.

"My bad. Doll Master." Chris laughed.

"Yes, now regarding these 2...I have already lost 3 men to them. I hope 'Hermes' have something to make up for it?" Doll Master said, not even turning around to face Chris.

"In fact, Tai Yi expresses his regret for your loss and has offered another ESPer from our organization to join you and assist." Chris answered.

"And when will I meet this ESPer?" Doll Master asked.

"She should be arriving soon...Ah, there she is!" Chris replied. Everyone turned to the door that just opened.

Back in the condominium, Ryu stared at J.Jay nervously as J.Jay stood at the balcony deep in thought.

"J.Jay.....Do you want to talk about anything?" Ryu asked.

"She told you her name didn't she?" J.Jay asked. Without waiting for a reply he continued.

"Mira Lelaine, was my girlfriend of 4 yrs. We broke up 2 months ago."

"Broke up!? Why? What happened?" Ryu asked.

"Don't know, that day, she just told me that she wanted to break up. Despite everything I did then, she refused to come back." J.Jay answered.

"Did you, like her or something?" Ryu asked.

"Like her? Dude, I f@#king loved her!! What she did that day....." J.Jay shouted, turning around and Ryu saw tears welling up in his eyes.

"OK, I understand. You don't have to say anymore. Come here." Ryu said.

When J.Jay didn't move, Ryu walked over and pulled him into the house and closed the blinds. Then he hugged J.Jay and told him:

"Its OK, I am your friend and there is no one else here but me. Pretend I don't exist and cry."

And J.Jay did. He completely broke down in front of Ryu. He hated himself for it, for being so weak in front of another guy but the tears won't stop. After 10mins or so, he finally managed to stop crying. Pushing Ryu away, he said:

"Dude, I am OK now, you can stop hugging me."

"You sure?" Ryu reluctantly released J.Jay.

"Yeah, besides, I am not gay...are you?" J.Jay commented.

Blushing and quickly standing up Ryu replied:

"No, at least I don't think so..."

"What the heck? Come on dude, be more decisive!" J.Jay laughed and hopped to his feet, feeling so much better.

"Forget Mira, let's get some practice done!" he said.

"Huh? But we haven't gotten any shut eye." Ryu protested.

"Who cares? GO GO!!" J.Jay quickly rushed out of the house.

"H-hey!! Wait for me!!" Ryu ran out after him.

It's late in the night when the 2 of them collapsed in an exhausted heap in a park. They had been sparring with each other since afternoon, trying to shape up and prepare for anything that could happen.

After resting for a while, they decided to call it a day and started to walk home wearily.
From behind a tree, the punk hair fellow was watching them.

"Doll Master, they are headed back home and completely exhausted. This could be our chance! Gimme the order to screw them and I will make very short work of them." he spoke through his hand phone.

"Fine, finish them then." came Doll Master's cold voice from the phone.

Turning off his phone, the punk whooped in the air and cracked his knuckles as he got ready to kick butt.

"I wouldn't do that if I were you..." a voice spoke to him from behind.

Shocked, he turned around and saw a woman dressed all in black save a golden double ringed bracelet on her right arm.

"Who the hell are you, bitch?" the punk asked.

Without replying, the woman dashed forward and tried to jump kick his face. Caught off guard, the punk barely dodged as he felt the sole of the woman's shoe brushed the tip of his nose. backing off 2 steps, he raised his fist in defence.

"Nice try! But that won't stop the Trap Master!!" Trap Master called out.

Running forward again, the woman tried to attack Trap Master again but just as she stepped onto the spot Trap Master was standing on moments ago, she felt a suddenly surge of energy on that spot.

Sensing something amiss, she quickly rolled over to the side and the spot exploded. Covering her eyes from the debris that was flying everywhere she looked up at Trap Master. Laughing out loud, he boasted:

"See, I am not Trap Master for nothing! Come on bitch! Let's see how many traps you can avoid huh? Every step is extremely dangerous you know."

Picking up a stone and throwing it in a random direction, the stone exploded on impact with the floor. Trying again, this time the woman threw several rocks in different directions and watched as they exploded. As the smoke cleared, she saw that some rocks did not explode.

Jumping onto these spots, she attempted another jump kick at Trap Master. Yawning, Trap Master easily avoided this kick as he was well prepared for it and the woman just flew through the air. Landing on the ground, the woman felt the floor trembling and exploded.

Sailing through the air, she grabbed the nearest tree branch and saved herself from possibly falling into another trap. All the while, Trap Master was laughing at her last flight through the air.

"Stupid bitch, now stay up there until someone rescues you eh? I got me some prey to fall into my trap." he said and turned to walk away.

"This isn't over Trap Master. Don't turn your back on me!" the woman shouted.

Raising her right hand, pure energy appeared and she fired it right at Trap Master's back. Turning back to face her, Trap Master's eye's widen with shock and jumped backwards. As the balls of energy hit the floor, he stuck out his tongue at her.

"Nya nya, you missed, bitch!" he mocked.

"Really, dimwit?" the woman simply replied.

Before he knew it, Trap Master heard a loud bang and found himself flying though the air just as the woman did and he landed flat on his back. Stunned, he lied there for a moment before struggling to recover.

"DAMN IT! I F@#KING STEPPED INTO MY OWN TRAP!!!!!" he cursed out loud.

"Well now, at least I know you can still get caught in your own trap." the woman noted.

Not intending to give Trap master any chance to recover, she raised her hand and fired multiple droplets of water that were formed from the air and ground. Poor Trap Master was practically dancing on his feet as he tried to avoid getting hit as well as stepping on his own trap.

"You evil bitch!! Come down and fight like a man!!" he shouted.

"One thing, you need to learn some manners young man, and another thing, I am no man. Stupid....." the woman said as she stopped firing her water bullets.

"What, you out of energy or something?" Trap Master asked, panting like a dog.

"Hardly, but I decided to do something special. Your traps explode on contact right? Even if it was fire?" the woman asked.

"Of course! My traps are so sensitive, even a breeze could set it off!" Trap Master boasted.

"Really, but there is a breeze but its not exploding...prove it then. Unless you are just talking big?" the woman mocked.

"OK!! Watch carefully!" Trap Master exclaimed, insulted.

Nothing happened.

"Are you sure.....?" the woman's eye's narrowed suspiciously.

"Of course you bitch! Don't insult me OK?" Trap Master shouted.

"Good," the woman replied. Raising her hand, the gentle breeze in the air started picking up speed and as Trap Master's jaw widen as he realized he had been tricked, the woman swung her hand down as a stream of flame flew from her fingertips and moved with the wind to surround Trap Master.

"You wanted to know who I was? I am The Sorceress." the woman said as all of Trap Master's traps were activated at the same time. When the smoke cleared, Trap Master was a senseless heap on the floor.

"Y-you.....b-bitch....." he managed to utter before falling unconscious.

"Tch, tch, rude even to the end. Dimwit..." the Sorceress looked at the direction of the condominium with great affection from her eyes.

"J.Jay....."

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 8: Who is that person?

2008-04-01T20:15:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Well, I have had a slight writer's block and couldn't continue the story for a while. But now, I have decided to create a slightly more complex story line by bringing a few new characters which will be slowly introduced. Heh heh, in fact, you readers might be in for a surprising twist. Hopefully, it won't cause you all to wanna burn me in hell! I hope......... *Cues evil death music* On to the story then.

Back at the condominium and all cleaned up, Ryu listened to what Jacques had told J.Jay. By the end of it, he was rather wowed at the immensity of their adversary.

"Damn, that is one big and powerful organization we are going against." Ryu said.

"Yes, I agree. That is why we need to get stronger. We can't afford to get "whipped" like this every time." J.Jay replied.

"Ha ha, very subtle J.Jay." Ryu said, eyes narrowing.

"Sorry, couldn't resist. But your powers really need to improve." J.Jay apologised.

"Improve.....how?" Ryu asked.

"Don't know.....but the important thing is that you need to be able to summon dragons faster. You got the damage caused down smack, but its the speed that causes it to lose effectiveness." J.Jay answered.

Both of them fell silent as they thought about it.

"Never mind, lets sleep first. We will think about it tomorrow." J.Jay said.

"Right, we will be fresh in the morning. Oyasumi!" Ryu slumped on the bed and fell asleep.

However, J.Jay remained wide awake, deep in thought. Getting off the bed, he went over to his wallet and picked it up. Opening it, he took out to photos and stared at them. Shifting his position, he stood at the balcony and remained there for a long time before finally settling down to sleep.

The next day was a Saturday and there was no school so the 2 friends stayed at home to experiment ways to help Ryu speed up his summoning. By noon, they still have not had any progress. Everything they tried did not work.

Annoyed, they decided to buy lunch first before continuing. Down at the void decks minutes later, Ryu spotted a group of kids playing cards in a corner. Going over, he saw that they were playing the YUGIOH trading card game.

Watching for a moment, he suddenly had an idea and quickly told J.Jay about it. Excited, they bought and ate their lunch quickly and rushed back home. First thing Ryu did, was rummaged his drawers and took out his own YUGIOH deck.

Picking out a few cards, he laid them on the floor. Looking at them, J.Jay nodded his head, signalling that Ryu should try idea out. Closing his eyes, Ryu took deep breaths to calm down. Then opening them, he concentrated and focused his ESP on one of the cards, which was the Blue Eyes White Dragon.

J.Jay who was watching earnestly, felt the sudden familiar presence in the room and could feel something brush past his shoulder. Looking up, he saw the shadowy figure of Blue Eyes White Dragon. Although its not fully materialized, the time taken for the summon to appear was significantly shorter.

"Alright, you did it dude! Great idea, using cards as a medium." J.Jay congratulated Ryu by patting his back.

"Thanks but I will need more practice on it. I will work hard to improve so that I can help you and not burden you." Ryu said.

"Great, but you got 1 thing wrong. You are not a burden either way. A burden would not have been able to help me out 2 weeks ago, a burden would not have been able to hold his own against an opponent without help." J.Jay corrected.

"I...I'm sorry. I should not have said that..." Ryu apologised, blushing and embarrassed.

"Forget it. You just need to have more confidence in yourself." J.Jay said.

The 2 friends spent the rest of the day training. Soon, a week had past uneventfully. The 2 of them happened to be returning home from a birthday party of a classmate's near the esplanade when they saw a familiar face with 2 other unknown people.

Walking closer, they were surprised to see Senbazuru there.

"Hey! Senbazuru! Its been a week already!" J.Jay called out, waving his hand.

Shocked, Senbazuru turned around and smiled when she saw the 2 friends.

"Yes, its only been a week and we meet again." she said.

"So, who are your friends?" Ryu asked.

"Oh, yes, I have not introduced them yet. My brother Kenny, and his girlfriend Alice." Senbazuru introduced the tall blonde man and the woman with a pierced lip and tattooed crosses on her hand.

"Are they the same as us?" J.Jay asked.

"Yes, we are both ESPers." Alice said.

"So, what are you guys doing here?" Ryu asked.

"Waiting for someone. I am about to have a competition." Senbazuru answered.

"Nice! Can we watch too?" J.Jay asked.

"No! I am afraid its of a private matter...sorry." Senbazuru curtly replied.

"Oh...I see. Fine then, Ryu and I have got some work to attend to. See you around then." J.Jay answered.

Leaving the trio behind, the 2 friends walked out of their sight then backtracked and hid behind some bushes and watched Senbazuru.

"Don't you think its rude to spy on someone?" Ryu asked, nervously.

"If you are scared there is no need to be here." J.Jay retorted.

Falling silent, they watched as Senbazuru's competitor arrives and they had a small discussion. Later, everyone left leaving only Senbazuru and Lavender as J.Jay and Ryu could overhear. throwing a stone into the sky, they got ready and the moment the stone hit the ground, they started running.

First off, Senbazuru immediately activated her sonic speed and dashed off in a blur of red. Leaving Lavender far behind. As they got further, J.Jay and Ryu checked their surroundings to make sure there was no one about, then took a ride on one of Ryu's dragons. Ryu had made sure the dragon could not be seen as it was transparent and that this property was transferred to the riders.

Following the 2 racers, they saw Senbazuru stop as red balloons were released to the air. Gazing up at them, Senbazuru seemed to be searching for something and made a great leap as she reached for one of the balloons.

Suddenly, Lavender appeared and snatched the balloon from Senbazuru's grasp. Running off towards the national indoor stadium, Lavender was surprised as the balloon she was holding bursted and senbazuru raced off with sonic speed, but not before she grabbed something in mid-air.

Near the entrance to the indoor stadium, Lavender's friend released a whole box of tennis balls and Senbazrur had to stop again. As she was searching for one particular ball, Lavender suddenly appeared a short distance away.

"Wow, that is 1 fierce competition." J.Jay exclaimed.

"Yeah, I wonder who would win?" Ryu replied.

By then, Lavender had a ball in her grasp and was running full speed to the Singapore national stadium. Senbazuru was hot on her heels and trying to catch up. Just as it looked like Lavender was going to win, she suddenly lost her balance and that moment, Senbazuru took the lead and won the match.

"Damn, that was close!" J.Jay said.

"Yeah, too bad she slipped. Or she would have won." Ryu agreed.

"Come on, let's go home. I'm beat." J.Jay yawned.

"You're telling me, I am the one using ESP here." Ryu snorted.

Back at the bottom of the condominium, they were still discussing about the race, excited like little children. The had just reached their apartment when they saw a woman standing in front of it.

"You're very late J.Jay, I have been here for over 2 hours." she said.

J.Jay kept silent. Looking at the 2 of them, Ryu was confused. He had never seen J.Jay so silent and serious before.

"Ermmm, Just who is this person?" he asked.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 7: Ryu the Dragon Tamer

2008-03-27T07:55:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Hey there everyone! Now I know I have been MIA for a while, I apologise. Reason being life and its joys have gotten in the way. Never fear! For I am back and with a vengeance!!Due to lack of vids, I have instead given most of the techniques a single link to a vid. But keep checking back on the links as if I do find new links I will replace them. So here goes!

"I am here to administer death to the 2 of you for not joining 'Hermes'." said the man.

"Good, then I can ask you:'Just what is 'Hermes'?' " J.Jay gleefully said.

Ready to kick butt, J.Jay quickly stepped forward, stopped by Ryu grabbing his arm. Looking at his friend in surprised J.Jay asked:

"What's up?"

"Don't you think you have been fighting a bit too much?" Ryu replied.

"Not really, I like fighting. Makes me feel alive." J.Jay skeptically replied.

"Come on man, give me a chance to show off will ya?" Ryu said.

Shrugging, J.Jay just stepped back.

"OK then, show me what you've got!"

"Promise! Don't worry, I won't kill him. Just make sure he is still awake for your interrogation." Ryu answered as he gave J.Jay a thumbs up.

Turning to face the man, who was idly waiting, Ryu called:

"Hey, sorry to keep you waiting. Ready when you are!"

"Finally, I am Jacques." bowing respectfully "Jacques the Longstar."

"Ryu, Mandai Ryu the Dragon Tamer." Ryu said, bowing back.

Facing each other, they stared momentarily, sizing each other up. No one moved and J.Jay was starting to get very restless.

Suddenly, Jacques whipped his hand forward and Ryu jumped back in response as the floor he was standing on cracked from an unseen force. "Faculty of Willpower?" Ryu thought to himself as he fired a shot of his own at Jacques.

After the first exchange, the 2 of them stood still again. Rolling his eyes, J.Jay thought to himself "Oh, boy. Looks like we have to fighters who like strategies.". As J.Jay finished his line of thought, the fighters acted again.

This time the exchange was longer and they both had not muttered a word since they started. After a minute or so, Jacques said:

"Pretty impressive control of Willpower. However, if you think this is all I can do, you are wrong!"

So saying, there was a flash of light and Ryu was thrown back with burns appearing on his shirt.

"So, Faculty of Conglomerates huh? Just nice, so am I!" Ryu said as he jumped to his feet. Thrusting his palm at Jacques, Jacques doubled over as his gut was slammed with a ball comprising of a mass of unidentified items.

Unidentified items? Particles is more like it.

"So, it seems this little brawl cannot be decided by our base ESP abilities. Now, My true power!!" Jacques raised his hand and something formed around it.

It was a gauntlet. And with that gauntlet, there was a tiny stick with a glowing orb at the tip that came with it. Swinging his now armored hand, all that J.Jay and Ryu saw was a flash of light, then Ryu felt his shoulder burn.

Staggering back, he looked at his shoulder and saw that it was burned in one line. Looking back at Jacques, Ryu prepared for another attack. This time, he is prepared.

Or so he thought. As Jacques swung his hand horizontally and Ryu focus his energy to protect his side, he was surprised to feel the burn, not only on his side which was already protected, but his back too.

"What kind of attack is it?" Ryu thought, slightly dizzy from the attack.

"Surprised?" Jacques's voice snapped Ryu back to the present.

"It's a whip. Made from light itself. There is no way you can defend yourself from attacks that have no fixed pattern!" Jacques explained. As Ryu stood again, he sent wave after wave of stinging attacks to Ryu.

"Hmph, you were foolish to face me as you are boy. You there!" Jacques pointed at J.Jay. "Why don't you come and save your friend and fight me?"

"Me? Your opponent is Ryu and as long as he stands, I won't be joining in anytime soon." J.Jay answered, crossing his hands. "Besides, don't you think you should be paying attention to your opponent? He is going to throw something interesting at you, you know?"

Whipping his head around, Jacques saw something surrounding Ryu. Not wanting to give his opponent any chance to counterattack, he quickly attacked. However his attacks were stopped by something. Something BIG....

"You got careless Jacques..." Ryu said. "By turning around for that few seconds, I had enough time to activate my special powers too."

"SHIT!!!" Jacques attacked again and again in vain. None of his strikes were touching Ryu.

"Jacques the Longstar... You were the perfect enemy to me, my powers take too much time to activate and you not only have speed but range on your side. However..." Ryu slowly said. "Your turn is over. *Ore no Turn! **Ore wa Blue Eyes White Dragon Shoukan!!!"

Raising his hand high up, the thing that had been protecting Ryu slowly materialized and took shape. A large dragon with eyes that shine like sapphire, gaping jaws and teeth roared into the night.

J.Jay recognized it as the dragon that helped him out a while back. Grinning, he shouted to the fear-frozen Jacques.

"I told you didn't I? Carelessness cost you dearly. Don't kill him now will ya?"

"I won't. Blue Eyes White Dragon! Burst Stream of Destruction 10%!!" Blue eyes widen its jaws and fired a white beam with a blueish glow that stuck Jacques head on and sent him sprawling to the ground.

Now trying to get up, Jacques felt a leg pressing on him and forcing him on the ground. Looking up, he saw J.Jay towering over him with his foot on his chest.

"Now, about my question...What is 'Hermes'?" J.Jay asked menacingly.

"I don't know! Don't ask me!" Jacques answered defiantly.

"Don't fool around with me. I know quite a few ways to make people talk and they ain't exactly comfortable." J.Jay warned.

Refusing to answer, Jacques stared straight into J.Jay's eyes. then he spat on J.Jay's shoes and said:

"Do as you will! I am not afraid of you!"

Sighing, J.Jay took his foot off Jacques "Don't say I didn't warn you. And its not me you have to be afraid of."

Stepping back, J.Jay started to glow and markings appeared on him.

"What constellation this time?" Ryu asked.

"Cancer." J.Jay simply replied. "***Sekishiki Meikai Ha!!"

Pointing his finger at Jacques, a purple spiral wave was fired and struck Jacques. Feeling an uneasy feeling, like he was free falling through the sky while being sick at the same time, Jacques closed his eyes and awaited what he thought was death.

But nothing happened. Surprised, he opened his eyes and nothing but dark skies and a barren wasteland that stretched for miles greeted him. Only J.Jay stood before him, standing out from the dark contrast of the background as he was glowing with a gold color.

"Where the hell am I?" Jacques asked.

"You just answered your own question. This IS hell." J.Jay replied.

"What the.....!? No way!!" Jacques cried. "Then how come you are here."

"Stupid, since I sent you here, I can generally come here at will." J.Jay replied.

"Now then, lets not waste time. You know why I brought you here. So save yourself from any pain and answer my question." J.Jay said.

"Never, there is no way this is hell! You won't trick me into giving you the information you want!" Jacques yelled.

Suddenly, the ground broke apart from underneath Jacques and decayed hands reached out and grabbed Jacques's feet. He yelped in terror and struggled to break free.

"You wasted time Jacques. Truth is, in here, you are technically still alive. And this very fact is a gigantic beacon for the souls of the dead. They want your life force to have life again. the longer you stay here, the more dangerous it gets." J.Jay told Jacques, proceeding to seat on a rock and watch Jacques struggle.

"Then what about you!? You are still here aren't you!?" Jacques screamed.

"I am protected you see. No stop wasting time and tell me what I want to know."

"NO!! NEVER!!"

"Suit yourself." J.Jay said and disappeared.

Soon, the place was crawling with the dead and Jacques felt first hand, the meaning of skinned alive. His skin was slowly scrapped away, leaving behind exposed flesh and muscle. Even then, the dead slowly stripped his muscle and flesh away bit by bit.

For years this excruciating ordeal went on and by then, Jacques had long given up hope that he could have told J.Jay all he wanted to know and had no need to suffer this fate. Just as he thought that, J.Jay appeared in a golden flash of light that Jacques would have worshiped as a god like presence.

"Now, are you ready to talk?" J.Jay asked.

"Yes, yes!!!! I will tell you everything, just stop this torment!!!" Jacques begged.

"I will, only after you tell me everything you know and I have decided you are not lying."J.Jay agreed.

Jacques proceeded to tell J.Jay everything he knew about 'Hermes', what the organization is, a few of its main ESP scions, Chris the Magician, Isha the Water Spirit, Tang Li the Fiery Eagle, Lightning Bao-Er and its financial status.

After he was done, Jacques begged again.

"Let me die please, I can't stand it any longer."

J.Jay thought hard for a moment, then nodded his head and snapped his fingers. In an instant, Jacques found himself back where they had fought and his was unharmed though his body did felt like it had gone through the actual process.

"Ryu, we're back!" J.Jay said to Ryu who was seating at a corner.

"Finally, you have any idea how long the past 5 mins were! Just staring at the 2 of you as still as statues..." Ryu grumpily said.

"Trust me, For Jacques, it was a good couple of years." J.Jay smiled.

"Huh? How come?" Ryu asked.

"Let's go, I will fill you in on the details back home." J.Jay turned and headed towards the condominium.

"Wait for me!!" Turning to look back at Jacques, Ryu shrugged and chased after J.Jay.

Left alone, Jacques felt tears welling up in his eyes as he hated himself for losing to a child.

"I swear, I will kill you the next time!!" he cried as his cell phone rang. As he took out jis cell phone to answer it, the name Tai Yi was on the caller ID.

*My turn! **I summon Blue Eyes White Dragon!! ***Praesepe Underworld Waves

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 6: Just what is 'Hermes'?

2008-03-23T06:22:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Right, as i have said before, the storyline now progresses at the same pace as the original comic. If i were to give an actual time in the comic when the last chapter had ended, it would be just after Mi sheng had met Lavender and had just found out about his ESP potential. This Chapter would now delve into J.Jay's interest in 'Hermes' and how close he was to the actual storyline. Story Time!!

After defeating Sha, J.Jay met his mysterious helper face to face. What would they do from here on out?

"Mandai Ryu the Dragon Tamer...Mandai..." J.Jay was deep in thought, why does that name sound so familiar...?

"Is there a problem?" Ryu asked.

"You...won't happen to be Mandai Ryu from FYP class, Mechatronics Engineering would you?" J.Jay asked.

"Bingo, dude. What a surprise, not only in the same project group but also ESPers too? How cool is that?" Ryu exclaimed.

"Rrright...cool..." J.Jay weakly replied.

"You don't look so good, got to clean you up first. That guy got you pretty good there." Ryu took J.Jay's arm over his shoulder.

"Don't worry, just let me sleep. I'll be fine in the morning..." J.Jay fall right asleep there and then.

"Yeah, still... You don't expect me to carry you all the way home do you? J.Jay?" hearing no response, Ryu realized that J.Jay was already fast asleep. Shaking his head, Ryu said:

"Ah, well. What the heck? Time to get home."

Trudging J.Jay back to the condominium where he lived, Ryu quickly brought him to his flat before anyone noticed anything. Inside, Ryu stripped J.Jay to his boxers and cleaned him up with a wet towel. Wiping his cloth over the wounds, he was stunned.

The wounds were healing at a rapid rate. Only lines were left in their place, and even those are slowly fading away.

"What the hell? No wonder he just needed to sleep...but this, this would be Faculty of Mutation right? If that is so, it doesn't add up. He should be Faculty of Conglomerates, Channels and Sensors based on what I saw just now. Don't tell me he can use 3 types of ESP!?"

Deciding to ask J.Jay when he woke up the next day, Ryu quickly finished cleaning J.Jay up and dressed him in fresh clothes. (Luckily we are almost the same size...) he thought. Yawning, Ryu washed up and went to bed as well.

The next day, strangely enough, they both woke up at the same time. Greeting each other with sleepy eyes, they walked towards the bathroom, J.Jay following Ryu. After washing their faces and freshening up, they yelped in terror as they suddenly noticed each other.

"Whoah!! Dude, why am I in the same toilet as you!?" J.Jay asked, pointing his finger at Ryu.

"I should be asking you, why are you in MY toilet with me!?" Ryu retorted.

Staring blankly at each other for a few moments, they bursted out in roars of laughter. 2 almost complete strangers had seemingly became friends in just 1 night. Later sitting at the dining table for breakfast, J.Jay said:

"Well, that was awkward. I haven't thanked you properly for saving my ass last night. Thanks."

"Don't mention it. I just happened to be watching fight that shorty...what was his name again...?" Ryu replied.

"Seriously, can't remember."

"Nevermind...yeah, so it seemed unfair that it was 2 v 1. Then he used hostages? That was too much, so I decided I should help." Ryu answered.

"But, I am more worried now is about this 'Hermes'. If they can find out I am an ESPer, they will definitely come for you too." J.Jay said.

"Yeah I suppose. But you would help me out then won't ya?" Ryu asked.

"Hell yeah. Wait, let me form a link through our ESP. That way, whenever you focus on me, you can actually send messages to me." J.Jay said.

"Cool, I want to asked though, Just what Faculty do you belong to?"

"I thought you might ask that. Truthfully, I don't know. Initially I could use all four...until I found I was not as good with Willpower so I focused on the other 3. As time passed, I became weaker and weaker in Willpower till 2 years back, I have not been able to use Willpower at all." J.Jay answered.

"I see. Well, mine is the Faculty of Conglomerates, Willpower and Sensors." Ryu said.

Later they went to school as per normal while spending time together searching for clues regarding 'Hermes' but to no avail.

A few days had passed, but still no luck. Sitting down just outside Ang Mo Kio Hub, they contemplated where to search next for the next few days as it is getting pretty late and the place is deserted like a graveyard.

Suddenly, there was a scream.

"Help, this robber stole my hand bag!" a middle aged woman cried in dismay as the said robber dashed pass J.Jay and Ryu.

Without a moment's pause, the duo sped after the culprit. After running for a minute or so, they still couldn't catch up with the robber. It was as though he running faster and faster, the image of his back smaller and smaller.

Concentrating, J.Jay cried out:

"He is an ESPer too! I sensed a faint hint of ESP over the area we just passed. No wonder..."

"Shit! A speed ESPer...annoying. Think I should send out my dragons?" Ryu asked.

Before J.Jay could answer, an extremely beautiful Japanese woman wearing a black jacket , mini-skirt and high-heeled boots appeared beside them, running effortlessly.

"Don't worry, I will catch him. Just be ready to pin him down." saying, the Japanese woman became a blur and within a heartbeat, had already reached the criminal and snatched the handbag back from him.

"What the...?" Ryu stared goggled-eyed.

"Come on!" J.Jay yelled! Pouncing on the robber.

Struggling, the robber wriggled free of J.Jay's grasp. Using his speed, the robber rained a barrage of blows at J.Jay. The Japanese woman was about to join in to help when J.Jay stopped her.

"No! This time, its my turn."

Nodding her head, the Japanese woman stepped back and watched. Just then, Ryu caught up and watched as well.

The robber knew that he had speed to his advantage so he did. Using his speed, he rained blow after blow at J.Jay, intending to give him no chance to counterattack. All J.Jay did was simply wait and defended himself from the attacks.

"What hell is he doing? J.Jay! Use that Aries Gold Saint thingey on the guy!" Ryu shouted.

Looking at Ryu, the Japanese woman asked:

"What Gold Saint?"

"Its J.Jay's ESP ability. It's really cool if you get to see it." Ryu replied.

"Too bad, I can't, he is too fast for me to get a lock on. And Crystal Wall won't work cause I don't have enough time to concentrate!" J.Jay yelled through his teeth.

"Then what the hell is such a fanciful attack for!?" Ryu cried out in exasperation.

"Dude, I am not called The Zodiac Knight for nothing. I still have 11 more constellations you have not seen yet!" J.Jay shouted back. Moment later, Ryu and the Japanese woman say markings appear on J.Jay's body.

"Faculty of Channels?" the Japanese woman wondered out loud.

"No, it's the sign of Leo, one of the 12 horoscopes. I see, so that's what you meant." Ryu corrected.

"I think you have hit me more than enough! I am going to return the favor tenfold! Lightning Plasma!!!" raising his fists in front of him, countless tiny lightning balls the size of a man's fists surrounded the nearby vicinity of J.Jay and the robber. Grinning now, J.Jay started to glow and the balls of lightning flew in various directions creating a mass net of lightning streaks, all smashing into the robber.

After all the lightning balls had made contact with robber, J.Jay deactivated the power and the robber fell to the floor, utterly paralyzed. Taking out his cell phone, J.Jay called the police just as the victim, pant and sweating profusely reached the scene.

"Wow, a very interesting technique. Allow me to introduce myself. I am Senbazuru, Sonic Speed Senbazuru." the Japanese woman introduced herself.

"Hi, I am J.Jay, Zodiac Knight J.Jay." J.Jay introduced.

"Mandai Ryu, Dragon Tamer Mandai Ryu." Ryu followed.

"You seemed quite beaten up, I have a friend who is in the Faculty of Mutation, she can patch you up real quick." Senbazuru offered.

"Thanks for the offer, but I can also heal myself so I am okay." J.Jay declined.

"I see, no problems then." Senbazuru said. Just then, her cell phone rang. "Excuse me... Hello, Senbazuru here. Yes, you have found Lavender? Good, I will be right over." hanging up, Senbazuru faced the 2 friends and said apologetically. "I am sorry, I would love to chat but I have something important to attend to. Good night." and she sped off at sonic speed into the night.

Walking on in the direction of home, J.Jay did not manage to pay his rent in time as his relatives are on holiday and he had to rent a house, Ryu had offered him free lodging and accommodations.

Just outside the condominium, the were halted by a lone man. All he said was:

"I am here to administer death to the 2 of you for not joining 'Hermes'."

"Great!! I have a question to ask you then...'Just what is 'Hermes'?'. " J.Jay gleefully replied.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 5: Dar and Sha of the Dark Shadow. A new Ally?

2008-03-21T23:16:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Well then, this time round, i will be trying something a little different. When i give the technique name, the name will become a link, to maybe a vid that has some animation to it. Hopefully, it will achieve a better visualizing effect for the fanfic. OK, let's move on now.

Moments ago, J.Jay had just defeated Elisandro with his own technique. Now he faces two more adversaries...Dar and Sha. Just what powers do the have?

"Not bad at all, I didn't expect Elisandro to get blasted by his own attack." Dar noted.

"Now, do you want to leave or will you die like he did? I have no qualms about killing anyone who threatens my life." J.Jay calmly said while facing the two identical twins.

"Shit, we will die anyways for failing so miserably. but I suppose it would be best to finish him off now don't you think brother?" Sha replied.

Nodding, Dar took off the cloak he was wearing. Sha imitated him. Getting into a ready position, J.Jay commented:

"I don't believe I caught your code names."

"I am Dar the Dark." Dar answered.

"I am Sha the Shadow." Sha continued.

"Together..." both of them went...

"We are Dar and Sha of the Dark Shadow!" So saying, they went and did some idiotic pose.

J.Jay's eyes narrowed.

"Dar and Sha of the Dark Shadow!? How much lamer can you people get!? I so regret asking for their names..." he growled.

"Enough yapping! Prepare for endless DARK!!!" Dar shouted, raising his hands with what looked like dark smoke trailing from his fingers. Looking carefully, J.Jay noticed that it was not smoke at all, but darkness itself.

"Faculty of Sensors..." he whispered to himself. Jumping forward, he tried to punch Dar with a punch, only to get stopped by something grabbing his arm. Surprised, he stared at Sha. Sha was too far away from him to have grabbed his arm...so what did?

As if in answer, Sha made a punching action in the air and J.Jay Felt something punch him in the gut. doubling over, he saw a shadow moving from the darkness, connecting to his arm then stretching out to punch him.

Jumping back, J.Jay caught his breath.

"I see, Dar creates sufficient darkness to cover the area and Sha uses the Darkness to attack as Shadows..." J.Jay struggled to think of a counter plan.

Making use of that slight opening, Sha proceeded to strike again and again. Bruised, J.Jay struggled to defend himself. Suddenly, where all the previous attacks were blunt Shadows, it changed to razor sharp edges and J.Jay was cut repeatedly.

"That's right, and thanks to my brother, I have no blind spots to my attacks but you however..." Sha snickered. "...Can't see in all directions at one time now can you?"

J.Jay frowned.

"He's right, I can't see in all all directions...but this idiot seems to be a loud mouth...I can probably use it to my advantage..."

But before J.Jay could try anything else, Darkness had complete engulfed him and countless Shadows came to dice him. Instinctively, J.Jay activated his barrier.

"Crystal Wall!!" Once again, the transparent cube that was Elisandro's demise appeared. Only this time, to house their creator. Strangely, the Shadows passed right through the wall and J.Jay was cut, completely unprepared.

Kneeling on the floor, J.Jay struggled to stay conscious from the pain. Panting, he looked up, only to be greeted by darkness. Through the darkness, he heard Sha's voice.

"You fool, my brother's darkness has no material form, its a essentially light itself. The fact your ridiculous wall is transparent is the reason it won't work."

Seeing J.Jay's snarl through the darkness, Sha grinned and decided to further humiliate J.Jay.

"I can see your face from hear quite clearly. It is priceless you know, too bad you cannot see your own face. Shall we test your wall again?"

Relentlessly, Sha attacked again and again. He missed all the vital points on purpose, wanted J.Jay to feel the most of the pain he intends to inflict.

Stopping to give J.Jay time to recover and ready for the next barrage, J.Jay stood up unsteadily and called to the darkness.

"So I suppose this is why you decided to attack me at night? Because there is no sun?"

"That's right you fool, you should have taken our offer at the first and only chance you had!" Sha shouted.

"Sha!! You are the Fool! Stupid big mouth!!" Dar shouted back through the darkness.

"What are you talking about brother?" Sha asked, bewildered by his normally quiet brother's outburst.

"You will know soon enough..." J.Jay interrupted.

Sha felt something punch him. With the force that he felt, there was no way it could have been human. Again and again, that something hit him. Seeing a bright glow from the corner of his eye, he dodged the next attack.

Looking around him, he saw holes in the darkness, as though they had been burned through. What happened? he thought to himself.

"You ever heard of stardust?" J.Jay called. "It is so bright, it can light up the darkness of space in masses."

"What!?" Sha cried.

"You talk too much, not only did you give your position away, you gave me so many hints, I figured that your Darkness while powerful can never compare to actual light, that is why you only attack at night."

"Don't think I will let you create enough light!!" Sha screamed, hurling as many blades as he could muster in one shot, hoping to kill J.Jay.

"I don't need you to let me, I already did." called J.Jay. Before the Shadows could cut him, a bright flash caused them to dissipate, revealing Dar and Sha's exact locations to J.Jay.

"Your brother's Shadow is very annoying, I think i will get rid of him first." J.Jay eyed Dar as they both attempted to flee from him.

"You are not going anywhere! Starlight Extinction!!!" J.Jay shouted. Dar was surrounded by a pillar of starlight. Slowly, his body started to fade away into non-existence.

"BROTHER!!!!!!!!!" Sha screamed. "What did you do to him, you bastard?"

"I just sent him to the world of the dead, which you shall be joining him soon after." J.Jay coldly replied, staring into Sha's eyes.

Trembling, Sha tried to run. Sha ran, he ran as fast as his legs could carry him. Suddenly, he heard the siren of a police car and he smiled to himself. Running in the direction of the sound, he found the police and using his shadows, overturned the car.

Picking up the officers inside, he turned and brandished them in front of J.Jay who has just caught up.

"Not another step closer, Monster!" he said.

Stopping in his tracks, J.Jay suddenly winced as the pain of memories that he wanted to forget came flooding back. Glaring at Sha, he took a step forward.

"Don't you dare call me a monster..."

"Not another step!" Sha repeated, waving the unconscious officers as emphasise that he is serious.

J.Jay stopped. Smiling wickedly, Sha attacked J.Jay.

"HAH!! You idiot, letting me hit you just because I have hostages. Surprising for a freakish monstrosity like you!!"

J.Jay gritted his teeth and remained silent, his painful memories causing anguish as well. Eventually, even he could not last under such attacks and fell to his knees in exhaustion.

"Finally, you fall. Time to end your life for my brother." panted Sha. As he prepared for the final blow, he felt something break his hold on the hostages. Whipping around, his eyes widen as he was swept back by a giant dragon.

"Hey Zodiac Knight!! I got the hostages, finish the guy off will ya?" a cheery voice called from nowhere.

"Thanks in advance!" J.Jay stood up and looked at Sha with murderous eyes. "To repay your hospitality just now, I won't even finish you quickly. I will leave so many holes on you it would be impossible for anyone to move you without you breaking into bits."

"N-no, please, mercy!!" Sha begged.

"No mercy for you, since you called me a monster." J.Jay replied, raising his hand as countless orbs of stardust appeared around him and Sha. "Stardust Revolution!!!" The orbs started revolving Sha, slowly picking up speed until Sha can no longer be seen through the raging whirlwind of stardust.

Turning around, J.Jay started walking away.

"Are you going to leave him that way?" said the voice.

"Yeah, I have cut off all power to the attack, it will stop by itself once it runs out of energy." J.Jay replied.

"Wow, that guy really pissed you off huh?"

"I would appreciate it if I don't have to talk to a ghost." J.Jay said.

"Sorry, I forgot you hate to talk without introductions" replied the voice. the stranger jumped out of a tree.

"My name's Ryu, Mandai Ryu." Ryu raised his hand to J.Jay.

"Jeremy 'Jay' Joel. You can call me J.Jay." J.Jay shook Ryu's hand.

"I am Ryu the Dragon Tamer by the way." Ryu smiled.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 4: J.Jay the Zodiac Knight

2008-03-20T06:50:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: The next chapter is now up. From here on, the story will progress straight into the actual storyline of The Celestial Zone.21. I have spent quite some time on the powers of J.Jay and I hope it will be fun to read on his various techniques. Now that's done, to the story!

Year 2008, 8 years have passed since Achilles had left J.Jay in the care of his relatives. Now a 20yr old polytechnic student at his final year, J.Jay stands at 1.78m tall with handsome, striking features and a thick crown of hair outlined with yellow streaks and tied in a small ponytail at the back.

He was in a particularly good mood today. That's because he received a call from Achilles, saying that he will be visiting Singapore on a business trip and would pay him a visit. They had not met in 5 yrs. Achilles last visit had been 3yrs after he left J.Jay in the care of his relatives and had taught J.Jay everything he could.

Now 5 yrs later, J.Jay is confident that he had achieved A-level of ESP through his hard work and was anxious to show it to Achilles. Walking along the streets, J.Jay felt several presences following him. Calmly, he picked up his footsteps and quickly led the stalkers to an extremely deserted area in Bishan Park.

Turning around, he called out to the darkness:

"Whoever you are, stop following me and get out here now."

Silence went on for a few more moments when suddenly, 3 figures appeared in the dark.

"Not bad, for a young ESPer, to realise that we were following him." commented the shortest of the group with a thick Spanish accent.

"And you are following me because?" J.Jay asked.

"We want to make you an offer, boy..." the short one continued before stopping mid sentence because J.Jay raised his hand to silence him.

"Hold it, Shorty. First off, I don't know any of you here. Let's start with introductions first, eh?" J.Jay said. "I'll start first. The name's Jeremy 'Jay' Joel. What's yours?"

"Sh...shorty!? How rude!! My name is Elisandro Buterpa. And these 2 are Dar and Sha." Elisandro pointed at the other 2 guys. "Now will you listen to our offer?"

Nodding, J.Jay crossed his arms and payed attention.

"We are here to give you the opportunity to joined the legendary 'Hermes'!" Elisandro raised his arms as he spoke like some sort of religious priest.

" 'Hermes'? Sorry, never heard of." J.Jay blandly replied.

"WHAT!!?? You don't know of 'Hermes'? And you called yourself an ESPer? Shame on you!!" Elisandro cried.

Annoyed, J.Jay clenched his fists.

"Look here, shorty. I am in a good mood today. Don't piss me off. Just say what you have to say or else I am leaving..." he warned.

"Don't call me 'SHORTY'!! Now speak. Will you join us or not? You should be smart and say 'yes'." Elisandro butted.

"And are you going to do if I say:'I'll pass.'? No thanks." J.Jay replied.

"Then we will have to kill you!" Elisandro shouted.

Jumping into the air, he launched a large ball at J.Jay which disintegrated the spot that J.Jay had been moments ago. Looking around, Elisandro saw J.Jay in the distance, leaning idily on a tree.

"So, you are a speed ESPer. Heh, speed wont work here. Too many obstacles!" Elisandro snickered.

"Aren't the 2 of you going to join in?" J.Jay asked Dar and Sha lazily. "If you don't, your friend here might die you know?"

"We don't need to. Elisandro will finish you off soon enough." Dar replied softly.

"Arrogant little jerk!! I will teach you manners and respect where you have none! You will witness why i am called 'Elisandro the Death Star'!!" Elisandro screeched in a high voice.

"First off, manners need to be reciprocal, secondly, respected has to be earned and lastly, I don't care nor want to know how you came up with that idiotic name." J.Jay countered.

Roaring in anger, Elisandro pointed a finger at J.Jay where a small green orb was appearing at the tip. An instant later, a thin green beam fired from the orb so fast, J.Jay barely dodged it. The tree that was hit blew up in a cloud of smoke, leaving bits and pieces of bark and leaves.

Dusting his shirt, J.Jay stared at the damage for a moment, then turned to face Elisandro.

"I see, so you blow up stuff like the Death Star in Star wars huh? Pretty good. You have earned some respect from me." J.Jay said.

"Only some? Well, there is more where that came from!!" Elisandro cried.

Pointing his fingers in various directions, he fired more beams that destroyed several objects in the park. Seeing J.Jay dodging all the time, he laughed.

"If you can only run then i guess your powers are not worth much. Tai yi has seriously overrated your powers!"

"Tai yi?! Who is that?" J.Jay wondered.

Dashing towards Elisandro, J.Jay raised his fists where battle markings have appeared and tried to bash his face in. Elisandro then disappeared just before the punch connected. Surprised, J.Jay barely avoided an attack from above where his jacket was caught and disintegrated.

"Faculty of Willpower!?" he said, looking up.

"Actually, its the Faculty of Conglomerates. Mine is Willpower and Sensors." a smug Elisandro boasted.

"I see. Then I suppose there is no need to worry." J.Jay replied.

" 'Nothing to worry'!? What a laugh, against a Faculty of Channels like you, my powers are at an advantage!" sneered Elisandro.

"Whoever said anything about being from the Faculty of channels?" J.Jay asked.

So saying, a circle with the mark of Aries appeared in front of J.Jay which appeared on his face, hands and shoulders. Sensing that something is not right, Elisandro landed and quickly fired a shot at J.Jay.

"Crystal Wall!!!" J.Jay shouted, then a transparent, glass-like barrier appeared between J.Jay and the beam.

Hitting the wall, the beam seemed to be absorbed into the barrier then was fired out back in the direction it came from. Shocked, Elisandro ducked and felt for the first time, how his victims were feeling as they were faced against his power.

"How did you like being attacked by your own technique?" J.Jay asked.

"What the hell was that?" Elisandro asked.

"Crystal Wall, a technique i created based on the anime Saint Seiya. Its from the Aries Gold Saint. Pretty impressive, no?" J.Jay replied.

"Interesting power...I supposed I have underestimated you. I apologize..." went Elisandro, bowing. Grinning evilly, he suddenly stood straight and fired beams with all his might.

"...But I don't believe you can reflect so many beams at once!!!!" he growled.

Sighing, J.Jay activated Crystal Wall again. This time, the glass-like barrier turned a sickly green as it absorbed all the beams fired at it. A moment's pause after the onslaught of beams ended, Crystal Wall reflected the combined attack of the beams in a blaze of green.

"No Way!!!" Elisandro's jaw dropped in shock as did his other comrades. Ducking onto the floor, he felt the air brush his back as the beams flew past him. Looking up at J.Jay, he exclaimed:

"Ha! You missed me." he jeered.

"I don't think so..." J.Jay said, closing his eyes in concentration.

Standing up and looking behind, Elisandro's eyes widen with horror. Another Crystal Wall had been erected and had absorbed the attack, ready to reflect it. Jumping to the side, Elisandro tried to escape from the beams...

Only to bump into another Crystal Wall. Falling flat on his butt by the rebound of his force, he looked around and saw that he is surrounded by Crystal Walls, trapping him inside a cube. Pounding his fists on the barrier, Elisandro cried out in horror as he realized the cube was shrinking and the beams were starting to move in different directions.

Eventually, There was no longer any space to move and there was a huge explosion, buffered only by the sturdy Crystal Wall cube. Elisandro is no more. Turning around to face Dar and Sha, J.Jay said:

"I forgot to mention, my ESP code name is Zodiac Knight. J.Jay the Zodiac Knight."

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 3: I'm an ESPer now!?

2008-03-19T10:21:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: OK, i had just finished the first 2 chapters in one day and now i am starting on the next just 30mins since i posted chapter 2. Now, the focus here is that i couldn't resist and had to write a conclusion to the ESP TERMINATOR's fight with the ESP Sharks. Hopefully, it will be appealing enough for all my Readers and Readers-to-be. Thank you in advance. On with the story!

30mins ago, we were left with the mysterious old man being introduced as the ESP TERMINATOR. Will the rest of the ESP Sharks face the same fate as their fallen member? Well then, enough with the suspense, (I hope =p) and let's read on.

"Heh... I don't know about you guys but i think we should...RUN!!!!!" screamed Strangler.

Agreeing that it was a good idea, the remaining ESP Sharks bolted in different directions.

"He cant possibly catch all of us right?" Gonda shouted.

"True, I am but just 1 man but......Porvur!! Chekov!! Stop 2 of them, i will handle the last one!" ESP TERMINATOR raised his voice.

There were flashes from the different corners of the alleyway and Gonda flew back to the scene together with the other ESP Shark(I will call him Bob since i am too lazy to create a proper introduction for him). Strangler was the only one left and the ESP TERMINATOR promptly gave chase. Obviously, Strangler was not much of a challenge since only moments later after giving chase, the was that familiar phrase and flash that signifies a sealing.

Recovering back to their feet, Gonda and Bob faced their unseen assailants. Activating their individual powers, they attempted escape only to get blown back, again. This time though, J.Jay knew how the were attacked. One of the assailants could use lightning and the other some sort of explosive power.

After being knocked back twice in a row by such powerful forces, the 2 ESP Sharks stared in the direction of the ESP TERMINATOR groggily. They knew that their time as ESPers is up. Raising his hand, the ESP TERMINATOR prepared to perform another sealing when he paused and asked:

"Now i am giving you a second chance. Will you reform now and do something worthwhile with your powers or would you rather lose them?"

"We will change!! We swear!! Don't take away our powers..." they begged.

Putting down his hand, the ESP TERMINATOR said:

"Then from now on, the ESP Sharks is no more. But if i catch any of you doing evil with your powers again, I will not hesitate to seal your powers away for good. Now go."

Scrambling to their feet, Bob and Gonda picked up Syd and Louie, running off in terror. All the while, J.Jay stared wide-eyed at the entire spectacle, awestruck. Raising a hand, the ESP TERMINATOR helped J.Jay to his feet and brought him home.

For the next few days, J.Jay had to recuperate in his own room, not allowed by the ESP TERMINATOR to leave his room. during that time, the one that brought him his food was this heavily build fellow who has a large scar on his left cheek and a missing right eye. This I believe everyone would have guessed by now is Porvur.

Despite his fierce look, Porvur was really very gentle and soft spoken to J.Jay. He tried to cheer J.Jay up by keeping him company until he had to run an errand for the ESP TERMINATOR, of which he would keep J.Jay company the moment he got back.

When J.Jay became fit enough to leave bed, he was surprised at the TERMINATOR's insistence that he should not leave his room. So one night, he decided to sneak out of his room and went downstairs. Seeing his living room light on, he crept closer. What he heard later shocked him to the core.

"But teacher, we have to leave for our next assignment! We are 4 days late already!" that harsh and arrogant voice belonged to Chekov.

"Yes, but we cannot leave him in the hands of the towns people. You saw what they can do to his young mind." Porvur countered.

"Still..." Chekov began.

"Enough, the both of you. Your voices will wake the boy. I agree that we are already late. However, considering the boy's potential, we cannot leave him as it is. I will honor his mother's dying wish, to bring him to his relatives home in Singapore to be cared for. " came the fatherly voice of the TERMINATOR.

"I don't care! I am not going to some stupid country! I want my mother now!" screamed J.Jay from behind the wall.

Stunned, the trio spun around to see a weeping J.Jay staring at them.

The TERMINATOR smiled and walked over to the boy. Kneeling down, he patted his head and said:

"J.Jay, mommy is no longer on earth, she has gone to heaven, a good place..."

"But why didn't she take me with her?"

"That's because she cannot. You have so many things to do before you can go to heaven."

"But i already don't have a daddy, now my mommy is gone!!" J.Jay wailed even more loudly.

"J.Jay, my name is Achilles...If u want, let me be your father in your daddy's place. OK?" Hugging the boy tightly, the TERMINATOR softly whispered into the boy's ears. Before long, they managed to put J.Jay back to sleep.

"I am afraid we will have to stay here a while longer..." Achilles said.

"No choice I suppose..." grumbled Chekov.

"I understand teacher...I will do my best to convince the boy to change his mind..." Porvur said.

Smiling, Achilles said:

"I leave it to you then Porvur."

For the next few days, both Porvur and Achilles tried to comfort J.Jay. Although touched by Achilles and Porvur's unwavering attention to him, J.Jay became increasingly introvert. His young mind now scarred by the cruelties of life.

One day, Achilles went up to J.Jay's room and told him:

"Do you still remember WTB?"

"You know him?" J.Jay's eyes lit up at the mention and the strange man from his past.

"Yes, he and I are good friends and i just spoke to him about you."

"What did he say?"

"He said that he still remembers his promise to teach you how to do that trick he showed you. And he wants me to teach you in his place." Achilles smiled and sat beside J.Jay's bed.

"Really, you are going to teach me!?" Excited, J.Jay leaped in his bed.

"Ha ha ha...this is the most excited I have seen you since 2 weeks ago." Achilles laughed.

"However..." he continued. "There is a condition."

J.Jay frowned.

"What condition?" he asked.

"If I teach you, you must agree to go to your relatives house in Singapore. In life, we must be fair even if others are not. 1 thing for another. Do you understand?" Achilles said sternly.

After a period of thinking, J.Jay nodded his head.

"Agreed. So what are we waiting for?" he jumped out of bed and got dressed.

"OK. But everything must start from the basics..." Achilles began. And so another 2 weeks passed and J.Jay moved to Singapore and and Achilles stayed with him for 1 year while WTB took over some of his duties in exchange.

After that 1 year was up, Achilles had to leave the boy, reluctant as the boy was as he had left his post too long. But not before telling the boy the sentence that would change his fate forever..."You are an ESPer now just like WTB and I."

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 2: The ESP Terminator!?

2008-03-19T08:30:00.000-07:00

Blogger's Notes: Originally, i had written this chapter and the previous chapter as one but i unintentionally wrote too much and decided to split it into 2 chapters instead. so that's why we have 2 chapters back to back. Now on to the chapter.

Previously, we left off with a mysterious group of man following J.Jay as he tried to escape from his school. Sensing someone following him, J.Jay ran in random direction trying to throw off whoever was following him. Suddenly, another man appeared in front of him and raised his hand to grab J.Jay.

Reacting quickly, J.Jay turned but sadly, he ran into a dead-end. He saw four shadows behind and he slowly turned to face his attackers. All of them were wearing the same black leather jackets with matching pants and shoes. and they all had wide evil grins on their faces.

"You lead us on a pretty good chase kiddo. But it's all over now." The one with a horizontal scar across his head said.

"Yeah yeah. He thinks we don't know he is trying to lead us away from his house. But really kid, we have already visited your house and gave your mommy dearest a very special treatment...Death." cackled another who sports long hair.

"Shut Up, Louie." commented the first man.

"I told u not to call me that in public Gonda!!" screamed Louie. "I am called Strangler!!"

"Whatever, look kid, i don't want to hurt you OK? so make this simple for us. We want u to join our gang of ESPers, called the 'ESP Sharks' and i wont take no for an answer. So, yes or no?" Gonda stared at J.Jay in the eyes.

J.Jay remained silent and replied by kicking a nearby stone at Gonda's face. Gonda merely flicked the stone with a wave of his hand without even touching the stone. Shaking his head ruefully, he said:

"Pity, you would have been great. Syd, if you don't mind, please roughen the boy up a bit."

The largest of the group, moved forward and started beating J.Jay up. After several minutes, Gonda raised his hand as a signal for Syd to stop. Raising J.Jay by the cuff of his shirt, Gonda walked over and stared into the boy's eyes.

"I am giving u a second chance. Will you join us? Or will die as pointlessly as your stupid mother did?" he asked in a dangerously low voice.

Feeling an uncontrollable rage building up inside of him, J.Jay screamed: "NEVER!!" and unleashed a huge wave of energy from his body. Taken by surprise, the four men were thrown back but quickly recovered. Promptly, they countered by sending waves and waves of energy at J.Jay. The waves were strong but not enough to cause any serious damage to J.Jay. They intend to finish it slowly.

Finally, J.Jay collapsed in a battered heap. Barely conscious, he looked at the face of his attackers and thought (Shit, i am going to die here...I don't want to die, I don't!). Squeezing his eyes shut, he prepared for the inevitable.

Nothing happened.

Opening his eyes, J.Jay saw someone standing in front of him, shielding him. His saviour turned around and J.Jay recognized him as the person telling him to stop in school.

"Are u alright?" the man asked in a kind fatherly voice.

"I have felt better..." J.Jay moaned.

Nodding, the man turned back to face the ESP Sharks.

"I would advise u to stop your nonsense at once and do something worthwhile with your powers." he said.

"And What are YOU going to do if we don't?" Gonda asked.

"Let's just get rid of him! He is but an old man and and blind to be precise." Strangler retorted. "Syd, sic him!"

And Syd did, only to get pushed back by a strange blue force.

"He is an ESPer!" he cried in a gruff voice.

"And so are YOU, you incompetent fool! Use your powers!" screamed Strangler.

No sooner had he said that, strange markings began appearing all over Syd's exposed face and hands.

"Faculty of Channels!?" old man said.

"Too late for you now, OLD MAN!! " shouted Syd and he launched himself on the frail old man, confident of his victory.

Or so he thought.

Not only was the old man unfazed, he was holding Syd back with 1 hand!! Sighing, the old man gave a gentle pushed and Syd flew back as if he was hit by his own force.

"Why do you evil scions have to do things the hard way?" the old man said while putting his right hand into his pocket. Taking it out, he revealed a strange round stone on his hand which started to glow a soft blue color.

"The four of you do not deserve your power. Therefore, I shall remove your connection to it forever!" the old man announced.

"What!?" exclaimed Gonda.

In a flash however, the old man appeared before Syd, completely unhindered by his blindness.

"Stone of Sealing, End the Power!!" he shouted before slamming his open palm with the stone in it onto Syd's chest. In a bright flash of light, Syd seemed to have been scrambled into bits only to be put back together. Only without the strange markings on his body.

The rest of the ESP Sharks stood with their jaws wide open. Syd stood up shakily and seemed to try and concentrate on some thing. In the few moments that passed, there was silence as everyone watched him. In exasperation, he screamed:

"I can't summon my powers, its like they are gone!!"

The ESP Sharks jumped on the spot.

"What!! Don't tell me that this old man is..." Gonda softly said

"THE ESP TERMINATOR!?" finished Strangler.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 1: What power?

2008-03-19T07:47:00.000-07:00

Year 1999, 5 years later. J.Jay was with a group of friends going home from school. They had just gotten off the bus and were heading to the mall when there was a scream. Turning around they saw a man waving a butcher knife and running through the crowd. Unable to avoid in time, J.Jay got caught by the man's free hand.

"NOBODY MOVE!!!!!" screamed the man.

Silence fell on the place. Nobody moved. J.Jay struggled for a few seconds before giving up. (Oh man, what the hell is this!? I can't believe that i am a hostage...) Kenny, J.Jay's best friend since pre-grade school decided to speak up.

"Let him go!" he shouted from where he stood.

"Shut up! I said don't move!" the man screamed. Brandishing the butcher knife a little too close for comfort in front of J.Jay's face.

"Whoah!! Watch it!" J.Jay screamed, struggling a bit.

"DON'T MOVE!!!!!" the man made a slash at J.Jay's face.

"Jay!!!!" Kenny leaped forward and kicked the man in the shin, HARD.

"ARGH!!!!" the man dropped J.Jay in pain.

Scrambling away, J.Jay turned around to see Kenny skewered by the man in a furious rage at losing his only hostage. Blood splattered all over J.Jay's face. The only thing that went through J.Jay's mind then, was Kenny's bloodied body lying on the ground with a blank stare looking into his eyes...then everything went blank.

When J.Jay came back to his senses, he realized everyone around was staring at him. Looking at his surrounding, he realized that the man was hanging off a lamp post nearby all battered up and Kenny was sitting in a corner all healed.

"Why is everyone staring at me?" J.Jay wondered out loud.

No one answered. As J.Jay walked towards the crowd, they all backed away in fear. Confused, J.Jay turned to Kenny and to his surprise, all his friends pulled Kenny away and they were all frightened of him.

"What's wrong will all of you? Why are u running away from me?" J.Jay exclaimed.

"FREAK!!!" screamed one of J.Jay's friends from behind the crowd.

"Yeah, u are a FREAK!!!" another exclaimed.

Before long, the whole crowd was bustling with screams and shouts of "FREAK" or "GET LOST, MONSTER". J.Jay, utterly confused by the crowds reaction, ran away from the scene. All their screams and shouts kept echoing in J.Jay's head, he could not make heads and tails from what had happened when he had blacked out. Reaching home, he quickly ran to his room and locked himself there.

The next day, J.Jay awoke thinking that everything that had happened yesterday was just a dream. To his horror, it was all true, and everyone in the neighborhood had gathered and was making a racket outside his house. J.Jay's poor mother; We shall call her Amelia, ok? Was trying to quiet the town down. Soon after the crowd dispersed...

J.Jay headed downstairs. Seeing his mother slumped onto a chair and weeping silently, he walked over and said silently:

"I am sorry, mom. It's all my fault, but I don't know what happened, really!"

Turning around, Amelia hugged J.Jay so tightly he almost couldn't breathe.

"No, its not your fault, its mine. I knew this would happen but i never thought it would be this soon..." she whispered.

"Mom!?" J.Jay looked at her, bewildered.

"It's nothing, go to school and come home straight after, you hear me, young man?" Amelia ordered.

"Yes mom."

J.Jay turned to prepare for school. After J.Jay had left, Amelia stared listlessly at the home phone. Then she searched the drawers and finally took out a piece of paper. Deep in thought, Amelia hesitated for a long time before picking up the phone and making a call.

The day at school was miserable. The normally very cheerful and outspoken J.Jay met cold shoulders every where he went. None of his friends spoke to him, even Kenny gave him a look of disgust. During lunch break, he was bullied every where and even the teachers who were nice to J.Jay, became extremely biased towards him. Everything was his fault even when he was not there.

When school finally ended, while everyone ran home with their friends, J.Jay stayed behind to finish up the punishments he received that day. While in the midst of his lines, J.Jay felt as if someone was watching him, staring at him from a distance. Feeling shivers down his spine, J.Jay quickly finished up and left quickly.

For a whole week, this went on until one day, J.Jay could not stand it any longer and he started a fight in school. It was a losing match however since everyone boycotted him. When he was finally pinned down, he saw that Kenny had not joined the fight.

"Kenny! Help me, Please!" he begged.

But Kenny only turned away but only after saying:"Get Lost, Freak Show."

That's it, J.Jay finally snapped. Well now, you cant blame him can you after all he has been through. Suddenly, a surge of energy pulsed through J.Jay's body and he lifted the people holding him and pounced on Kenny. Screaming in mad rage, he pounded his fists onto Kenny repeatedly ignoring Kenny's pleas for mercy. At last, J.Jay stopped, and when he saw his bloodied hands and Kenny's motionless body on the floor, he turned and ran, even as he saw an unfamiliar face calling him to stop, he ran.

As he left the school, he did not notice the group of people watching him from behind the signpost.

"Let's go, we have confirmed his power." one of them said.

"Now, to make him join our gang." said another.

And they followed J.Jay into the distance.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Prologue Chpt: The Unknown Power!?

2008-03-18T20:10:00.000-07:00

Year 1994, in the country of New Zealand. On a wide green field, a group of children were playing football. In a distance, one man wearing a hat was watching the young group keenly. Before long, 1 of the children separated from the group and started walking in the direction of several houses. Eyes following the lone child like a hawk, the man followed the child.

The man waited outside the child's house for a few minutes before walking away. On the very next day, the man appeared again and waited for the child to appear. As the child left the house to head to school, the man followed the child a short distance just until they were out of sight of the house before running to the child.

"Hi there, kid." he said.

Turning around, the man noticed a boy with a gleaming smile.

"Morning, Mister. Why are u following me everyday?" he innocently asked.

Taken back, the man asked:

"You know i have been following u?"

"Yupz, I am very sensitive to paranormal stuff. You are not a normal person right, Mister?" the boy replied.

"True, i am not normal..." the man replied.

The boy continued smiling.

"What's your name boy?" the man asked.

"Jeremy 'Jay' Joel Tan. What's your Mister?" the boy introduced.

"My name is WTB. So how should i call u?" the man replied.

"J.Jay is what my friends call me." J.Jay said.

"J.Jay, thats a nice name." WTB commented.

J.Jay's smile grew wider.

"how old are you J.Jay?" WTB asked.

"I turned 6 just last week." J.Jay answered.

"6 yrs old...just nice." WTB said to himself.

"J.Jay, i want to show u something fun as a late present ok?" WTB asked.

"OK!!" J.Jay nodded.

WTB closed his eyes and silence ensues. After while, the leaves all around the floor started swirling in the air forming various interesting shapes. Finally, they formed the words 'Happy Birthday J.Jay!!' in mid air.

J.Jay reacted in kind by jumping up and down excited.

"Cool! WTB, can you teach me that trick?" he asked.

"Ok, but i need to check something first alright?" WTB replied.

Nodding, J.Jay closed his eyes as WTB instructed and waited. Taking out the Mentor Stone from his pocket, WTB concentrated and slowly the violet colored stone started changing hues. Finally settling on 1 color, WTB looked at the stone and his eyes widen.

The Mentor Stone was grey in colour and with the impression of something swirling inside it. (Well I'll be... I have never seen this power before...) he thought to himself. (Looks like i need to observe him more. Interesting, Most interesting.) he smiled. In front of him, J.Jay frowned with his eyes closed.

"Something is wrong, right WTB?" he asked.

"No, nothing at all." WTB replied. (He is really sensitive! He noticed something was wrong...)

"J.Jay, open your eyes and listen to me." WTB said.

"Yes, WTB?" he asked.

"Don't you have school?" WTB asked.

"Oh No!! I am LATE! Sorry WTB, I have to go!" shouting, J.Jay ran off.

"Heh, hopefully, we meet again." WTB stares at the shrinking figure in front of him.

The Celestial Zone.21 Fanfic~Jay Version~ Credits Where they are due.

2008-03-17T08:24:00.000-07:00

The thing every reference to well known stuff needs to have.... Disclaimer!!!!! I do not own "The Celestial Zone" in any way and many characters i might create are in no way connected to anyone and I apologise for any inconvenience caused due to resemblences to actual people.

That said, i will get to writing details about the content of this fanfic. I will skip all the lengthy details about the celestial zone, ask your neighborhood celestial zone-iac for them. first off, i will start off with my lead char who goes by the name J.Jay, but we will call him Jay for short. He is a polytechnic student, 20 yrs old.

If possible, in the near future(i hope :p) i might link the story with Tobias Fong's fanfic found on this website http://fictionalfootball.blogspot.com/, but onli as a link. There will be no direct relation whatsoever to his character and mine. There may be alot of references to animes and mangas so i will imply with RED LETTERINGS if they are of such nature so do not credit me on such references.

Thank you for reading through such a lengthy introduction and i hope your interest have not waned, for i feel that it is important to note all these. I would get started asap but i fear that sleep is getting to me... before i go though, my friends just sent me an email with this website and i feel that everyone should read.... i am such a sucker for these stories...http://www.goodybooks.com/ibelieveyou.com