The Celestial Zone.21 Fan Fic Chpt 17: Upgrade, upgrade, upgrade! A reunion!?

Blogger's Notes: Are you all enjoying the stories? Pls leave your comments on the story so i know what you expect to happen in the story. Any questions on the story will entertained asap by me. For those who follow the actual story of the celestial zone, can you guess which part of the story am i at now?

"Wait a minute, you are telling me that you are the son of The Terminator? But why didn't my family database have any records of this?" Mira asked.

"Dad knew it was dangerous for me if anyone aside from the organization found out. And besides, we are not really blood related." J.Jay answered.

"So do you know how he terminates ESPers?" Ryu asked excitedly.

"I'm sorry Ryu, I do know but i am not going to reveal the secret unless Dad decides to tell you himself. He would be arriving to Singapore soon." J.Jay answered apologetically.

"Oh, I see. Well, I respect that." Ryu said.

"Ah, I am sorry to intrude but may I request a match with all of you?" Kakushi suddenly requested.

All eyes were on her.

"Are you sure? I mean, Jay here just treated your injuries last night." Ryu asked worriedly.

Kakushi nodded.

"Of course it wont be now. a few days later I suppose. I will visit soon. But I need to take my leave now." she said bowing. J.Jay bowed back.

After Kakushi left and everyone had settled down, J.Jay asked.

"You all aren't angry I kept this from you?"

"Not at all. After all, something like this cannot be revealed so easily. I understand." Mira replied.

"I agree. I won't have believed you in the first place." Ryu answered.

A few days later, Kakushi arrived for the match. They found a large secluded area and prepared to fight. Kakushi explained that it would be a one on one fight. Naturally it would span across a couple of days. Also, she explained that Achilles requested this match as a test for J.Jay's abilities and also his friends as a added bonus.

J.Jay was up first. Decided to start the ball rolling, he did not waste any time. Instantly, he activated his abilities and the mark of Libra appeared. In a flash, he had closed the distance between him and Kakushi. His right arm poised for an uppercut, he shouted as he executed the attack.

"Rozan Sho Ryu Ha!!"

Kakushi flipped back with incredible agility, feeling the wave of energy as it raised into the sky. Looking up, she saw an image of a dragon rising into the sky. I don't dare to imagine what would have happened to me if it actually connected. But now, a moments distraction could prove dangerous, she quickly counter attacked by firing several ESP shurikens at J.Jay.

Unable to get away in time, J.Jay took several shurikens head on. Shit, Sho Ryu Ha is a move that leaves me open for 2 seconds if the move does not connect. That's what I get for being careless. Getting back on his feet he was met with another onslaught of shurikens from Kakushi. Thinking fast, he activated another ability.

The sign of Virgo appeared.

"Kan!!" J.Jay shouted, placing his palms together.

In a flash of pink light which formed into a giant lotus bud enveloped J.Jay and began to bloom, its petals spreading outwards deflecting the shurikens away. Changing to long ranged tactics, J.Jay opened his palms, a ball of energy forming while the lotus barrier still stood as Kakushi fired shurikens again and again in an attempt to find a weak spot.

Cupping his hands in a meditative stance, the lotus barrier quickly reformed into an energy being shaped like a virgin on a horse. With a sword in hand, it dashed towards Kakushi.

"Tenma Kofuku!!" J.Jay shouted.

Nimbly, Kakushi avoided the attacks of the energy being and managing to swivel to its back, fired shurikens at both the being and J.Jay. Prepared, J.Jay dodged the shurikens while the being got pin cushioned with shurikens. Undeterred, the energy being turned around and continued swinging its sword at Kakushi.

Seeing as there is no other way, Kakushi had to use her Vacuum Sword Play to hack the energy being into pieces. Turning to J.Jay, she launched a full scale attack of slashes every where. Before long, J.Jay, being incapable of keeping up with the speed of attacks was cut many times.

Knowing that this would eventually result in his loss, he changed abilities again. This time, the Mark of Capricorn appeared. Knowing full well by now that a different sign meant some new ability, Kakushi attempted to slash J.Jay from over head to finish the match. In a surprise move, J.Jay raised his left arm as if to shield himself from the attack.

Unable to stop now, Kakushi feared that she would hack off J.Jay's arm. As the attack connected, Kakushi felt her Vacuum Sword hit something hard. Moving back, she saw that J.Jay's arm was still intact where his sleeve was cut by the Vacuum Sword.

"Excalibur..." J.Jay quietly spoke as he swung his right arm in a vertical arc at Kakushi.

Sensing something not right, Kakushi instinctively stepped to one side. Hearing a loud snap, she turned to see the tree standing behind her had split into half. Looking closer, she saw that the split was not natural, it was cut by something.

Excalibur...he has even got a weapon like attack, incredible. However, it has many flaws... Kakushi thought as she turned back to face J.Jay as he swung his limbs, sending waves of Excalibur at Kakushi who blocked them with her Vacuum Sword.

As J.Jay moved for another attack, Kakushi stopped the match.

"Enough. You have done very well in developing your powers but they have many flaws. The biggest flaw is that your attacks are too flashy. Before you begin, if your opponents have seen the attack before, they would be prepared for it. The other big flaw is that You can only use one style at a time and you are too slow in changing styles. Had we fought on, I may have been able to catch your timing and struck you when you were the most vulnerable." she commented.

"Yeah, I am working to speed up the transition from constellation to constellation. But...I never thought of the first flaw at all. All the while I have never had to face the same opponent twice...I have to put more thought to it." J.Jay acknowledged.

Kakushi nodded.

"Good, you have not let teacher down. He had high hopes for your progress and I am sure he would be pleased to know of your achievement."

While heading back, the 3 of them had discussions on how to improve on J.Jay's flaws. In the next couple of days, Mira and Ryu both had a match with Kakushi as well and the 3 of them eventually were able to develop new upgrades to improve their powers.

Then Kakushi said she had to meet an important person and left. The same day, J.Jay received word from Achilles that he had already arrived in Singapore and would try to find time to visit as soon as possible.

The Celestial Zone .21 Fan Fic Chpt 16: The truth, a shocking development!?

Blogger's Notes: So sorry for the lack of updates, i have taken up a one month job at Chinese Garden as a Lion Dance Performer. Its a very taxing job and by the time i get home at night, i am pretty much too beat to write anything. So as a special, today i will not only update one blog, i am going to update all of them!! so here goes!

"I will tell you everything, I swear..."

That was what Mira told J.Jay an hour ago after the escape of Doll Master. Since then, they had nothing but clean themselves up and sitting on the sofa in Ryu's apartment staring at each other.

Crossing his arms, J.Jay leaned back and tapped his feet impatiently. After a while Mira started to explain the situation to the 2 friends, from the time J.Jay chased after that Ruby character to the point when she decided to break up with J.Jay.

At the end of the story, J.Jay was completely silent... Mira looked at Ryu worriedly. Ryu shrugged his shoulders and shook his head, implying that he did not know what J.Jay was thinking at all.

"Why didn't you tell me this earlier?" J.Jay spoke in a soft voice.

"Because I know you...What you would have done would no doubt brought danger to yourself and I cannot stand to have you hurt because of me." Mira replied.

"So, its my fault that things turned out this way then?" J.Jay said.

"No, it was never your fault. It was my choice and I forced you to go along with me. Its my fault." Mira shook her head.

They spent another hour sorting things out.

"What will you do now that you have betrayed 'Hermes'?" Ryu asked.

"It doesn't matter anymore. I have already done the best I can collecting information without going against the organization's protocols." Mira replied.

"No, you are wrong. It matters now because you will be a target for their assassins and I won't let you get hurt." J.Jay replied indignantly.

"sigh...What would you have me do then?" Mira asked.

"You can move in with us..." J.Jay started before he was interrupted by Ryu.

"or you can rent the apartment just across us since its been empty for some time now." he said.

"I think I will rent the apartment then." Mira agreed.

J.Jay agreed as well and with their plans settled, Mira moved in within the next couple of days. One day, while reading the newspaper, J.Jay saw something that caught his attention.

It was a picture of a large crater in a park. The article read that specialist says that the crater is not possibly man-made and that despite the sunny weather, it was possible that a lightning strike caused it.

There is no way a lightning strike caused this...Its definitely the result of an ESPer power... J.Jay thought. Gathering both Mira and Ryu, they planned a visit to that place at night.

At dusk, the trio examined the scene and were completely shocked at the breath taking residue of ESP lingering the area. Who or what ever caused it must have been extremely powerful.

However, finding no clues or anything of interest, they left the scene and headed back. While passing a HDB flat, they heard some ESPer fighting and headed to the scene. When they arrived, all they saw was a naked woman pinned to the wall by icicles.

J.Jay and Ryu blushed at the sight and quickly turned around to look the other way. Mira quickly ran over and activating her powers, melted away the icicles. supporting the woman as he was released, Mira shouted at the guys to remove their shirts and cover the woman up.

Only exposing the injured part of the body, J.Jay quickly activated the Faculty of Mutation to close up the wounds while Mira kept the body warm to prevent the cells from dying of cold. Ryu took the post of patrolling the area to make sure they were alone.

After closing the wounds, Ryu carried the woman up to Mira's apartment and laid her on the bed. Returning to the other apartment, the 2 guys waited while Mira stayed with the woman.

When day broke, Mira came in the apartment with the woman following behind. Bowing at them she introduced herself.

"Ohaiyo Gozaimasu, my name is Kamiya Kakushi, I thank you all for helping me last night."

"Kamiya!? You don't mean you are Kamiya Kakushi who is also known as the ESP Ninja from the organization!?" J.Jay jumped out of his seat.

Kakushi looked taken back.

"H...How did you know? Do I know you from somewhere?" she asked.

"Ah...No, we have only just met but i have heard much from father about you." J.Jay replied.

Father? Who is he? Kakushi thought.

"Who is your father anyway?" she asked.

"Haha, you won't believe me even if I told you...He is Achilles, the ESP Terminator."
J.Jay replied.

"WHAAAAAT!!??" the others in the room exclaimed.

"You...you know Teacher? Then are you J.Jay?" Kakushi asked.

"Yeah, I am J.Jay. Dozo yorushiku, senpai!" J.Jay replied.

Mira and Ryu were utterly lost. My ex-boyfriend is the son of THAT ESP Terminator!? My friend has such a famous dad? Holy crap! What is about to happen now?

The Celestial Zone Fan Fic Chpt 15: Gaiden Part 3

Blogger’s Notes: Right on! Now are my holidays so I will try to triple my speed of updating. In case you were all wondering, how many constellations does J.Jay have? The answer is 12. By the Greek constellations, there are 12 of them revolving around the sun. Up till now, I have used Aries, Taurus, Leo, Cancer, and Scorpio. There are 7 more to go. This Chpt, u will be treated to maybe another 2 more constellation. Enjoy, and I will try to end the flashback by this chpt.

The punk shouted, “Can you catch me? Slowie!” taking off towards the specific area as though it was all planned. Looking back, the punk seemed pleased that J.Jay did not fall back, but was gaining on him.

“I swear I am going to tear this asshole apart!” J.Jay growled.

Reaching a secluded area, the punk turned around, posing a Sir Stamford Raffles Pose with a little smile on his lips. The area is nothing more than an empty space behind two warehouses on the riverside, an adequate place. Catching up a moment later, not at all looking breathless. J.Jay posed for the fight.

“Good, you’re looking good. Name’s Ruby, what’s yours?” Ruby asked, annoyingly polite.

J.Jay did not reply, merely made flapping motions with a single hand, a look of concentration on his face. Ice crystals shaped like snow flakes began to form in the air, the temperature around the area pummeled to the depths. The target punched out with his hand, a blast of icy cold wind started howling, blinding everything and pushing everything towards Ruby.

“Diamond Dust!!” he shouted, a glowing mark of Aquarius appearing in the air in front of him, then settling down to his body.

When the winds settled, Ruby was encased in an ice block, much like an ice coffin. “Spirits of Fire – Heat Skin!” Ruby said quietly amidst the howling winds. The diamond dust did not last even 5 seconds before exploding outwards. Ruby stood shaking his hands, as if shaking out water, his whole body glowing cheery red. Steam was rising from all over Ruby’s body. Ruby looked up with a smile, “You like it?”

J.Jay was taken back, finding it hard to believe Diamond Dust did not work on Ruby. He crossed his arms, preparing Great Horn in response to whatever Ruby had up his sleeves.

Ruby grinned, “Watch now!” and proceed to deactivate Heat Skin. Ruby’s eyes glowed red, clenching his fist and sprinting forward, “Akaiikugan, kai! Spirits of Wind – Cyclone Limbs!”

Ruby’s four limbs glowed green for a moment, then formed into green scales forming nicely into a set of gauntlets for the hands and greaves for the legs.

J.Jay was taken back as he lost sight of Ruby for a moment, raising his ESP perception abilities, J.Jay just barely managed to keep up with Ruby’s speed before flicking his arms out as he caught sight of Ruby’s widely grinning face at arm’s length. His arms glowed with another strange marking for an instant.

“Great Horn!!!”

A psychic shockwave in the form of a giant bull blasted out at Ruby, but was shattered after an instant of clashing with a bright green light from Ruby’s gauntlets. J.Jay’s eyes widen in surprise, as Great Horn was broken. The 2nd time his attacks were ineffective. However, they were evenly matched in power, as the gauntlets shattered upon contact with Great Horn, causing no damages whatsoever.

Ruby’s eyes glowed stabbing red for a painful moment when he came into contact with the Great Horn. When the gauntlets shattered, Ruby looked surprised for a split second before doing 3 consecutives back flips to get out of range of a sudden snap kick from J.Jay.

Not wanting to give Ruby a chance, J.Jay pointed at Ruby, the mark of Aries appearing in midair, spinning rapidly. Ruby became surrounded by a pillar of starlight.

“Starlight Extinction!!”

As Ruby began to fade away, he shouted, “Spirits of Fire - Fiery Reversal!”

The starlight burned up into nothingness, yet all it contained was a fiery image of Ruby.

“We are evenly matched, Jay. Yes I know your name. You passed! Don’t worry, I’m not your enemy. Should you want to find out more about me, ask around for Chiaki.” Echoed Ruby’s voice, laughing, daunting, mocking.

Staring around for the jerk, J.Jay tsked in frustration.

“Don’t let me catch you next time…or else…” J.Jay swore under his breath.

Back in the pub, Mira sat about anxiously, fretting over the ominously feeling she had. Hearing her message alert of her handphone, picking it up, she saw the message. It read:

“Mira, your next mission is to join the organization ‘Hermes’ and send information regarding it to Achilles. In order to avoid unnecessary trouble, you have to break up with your boyfriend by latest this week. Signed, WTB”

Mira’s eyes widen in disbelief. Break up with J.Jay? That’s the first time the organization has made such a request of its members. Surely there must have been some mistake. Sending a quick reply to WTB for confirmation, Mira waited in cold sweat for the reply.

When it arrived, Mira read it with trembling hands. Blood drained from her face when she saw the reply. Just then, a man with a moustache and a long pony tail arrived beside her. Giving her a curt bow, he introduced himself.

“Good evening, Mira Lelaine, my name is Chris, Chris the Magician. Mind if I take the seat beside you?”

Chris the Magician!? What is he doing here? Mira gave a quick nod of her head and Chris took the seat.

“Judging from your looks, it seems you have heard of me. That would make this a lot easier. So I would cut straight to the point. I am offering you a chance to join ‘Hermes’. It is a great organization but I will not reveal too much. If you are interested, I can tell you more after you have joined us.”

You have got to be kidding me…Mira thought. Talk about speak of the devil, what were the odds that she would be approached minutes after receiving her mission? What should I do? Mira’s mind raced for ideas. I am not ready yet, I need more time.

“Chris, this is so sudden…I am really not sure how to answer you. Could I have some time to think about it please? I will give you an answer by the end of the week.” Mira pleaded.

“Oh, of course, it was rude of me to have sprung this on you. Sure, I can wait until then. I hope to hear good news from you…For your sake…” Chris replied, smiling.

“Here, I will give you my number so you can contact me earlier if you wish.” Chris said before he left the seat.

Turning around, Chris was met with J.Jay, obviously green with jealousy. Smiling, Chris left, bumping into J.Jay, only to find himself suddenly enveloped in a deadly presence that he felt was all too familiar. Whipping around he tried to find the source but the only one near him was J.Jay.

Unnerved by this presence, Chris quickly fled the scene. Once outside, he heaved a huge sigh of relief… such a suffocating presence, he had only felt it from one other person, Tai Yi Dao, leader of ‘Hermes’.

Back inside, J.Jay remained silent, standing still as a statue. Mira merely stared back. Deciding to break the silence, she said:

“Look, he was not flirting with me ok? He was only here for less than 5 mins…”

But before she could finish, J.Jay shook his head.

“Don’t bother, I trust you. And…and…” he stuttered. “I am sorry for everything I said just now.”

“Don’t mention it…I never took it too hard.” Mira reassured him.

After that, they left the pub, Mira feeling heavy in her heart…… All week long, she could not concentrate, could not sleep nor eat properly. The thought of breaking up with J.Jay wore her down. Before, she knew it, the one week was up and she made a painful choice.

That fateful night 2 months ago, she broke up with J.Jay, bringing a start to the events that have occurred and tearing J.Jay apart.

Back to the present,

“Mira!!! I want answers and you are going to give it to me!!” J.Jay screamed.

“Haiz……Calm down first, J.Jay…”Mira sighed.

“Fuck you!! How the fuck do you expect me to fucking calm…” J.Jay began.

In a flash, Mira landed one of her famous jump kicks right smack on his face and J.Jay fell flat on his butt. Trying to get up, he realized how beat up and tired he was so he just sat there, trying to recover some strength.

“I am sorry J.Jay, I promise, I will tell you and Ryu everything…I swear, everything.” Mira said.

Oooops, a minor mistake

Well, it appears in my excitement at putting up the new blog, i forgot to put the link there. Here it is http://sacredforcerevelations.blogspot.com

New Blog Up

Ok, the 3rd blog is up. I had trouble because i could not think of a good name for it. I still think the name is kinda weird but i will let it slide. look forward to the first chapter and new chapters on the way!

New Blog up and the next coming!!

Well, i said i would come up with a new story so here it is!

For you to know, i have another blog here http://legendofsword.blogspot.com/ There is no relation whatsoever between these 2 even as another blog coming up soon. Do not fear, it does not mean that i wont be posting here anymore!

Therefore, i will be having 3 stories ongoing. Do be patient as it might take some time to update. also, if any one is interested in drawing do let me know as i am looking for artists to draw pics if needed to facilitate understanding for the story.

Now look forward to the first chapter and the next blog, which i will post probably tomorrow or the day after.

Competition results and new story possibly coming?

Right, first off, i did not do as well as i had hoped. but i am not ashamed because the other competitors were really really strong. But i think most of you wanna know the actual results right? So here it is, i got 8.13 points out of a total of 10 points.

The difference?

Several opponents got 8.3 or 8.4 onwards. as you see, even a 0.2 difference gives a gold or silver medal to your opponents. Gotta work harder for next year then.

Oh, and the new story? I am planning to write both fanfiction and a story of my own at the same time so readers will have more chapters to look forward to.

Sure, i said original but in a sense, i am still borrowing other people's work, namely several well known comics and animations.

Now, don't go all :"Jeremy 'Jay'! You lousy no good lazy bum! Get your own work!!" on me yet. I have done my homework okay? I am merely borrowing aspects and not the whole thing so the overall thing would still be an original conception of mine.

Right, now, did i say a new story? I forgot to mention the sudden brainwave i just had so make it possibly 2 new stories coming!

Bwahahaha!! *Gets rotten stuff thrown into his face by all his fictional characters*

Eh-Hem! *Cleans himself up*

Okay, quick review on the stories. Pls note, they are work in progress, so therefore, subjected to change. The review is to whet your appetite for the possible stories.

First Story:
Based also in Singapore, the story follows a young man's journey through NS, discovering many deadly secrets and the power hidden within him! First he is fighting for just his country, but as things go out of control, he finds the fate of the world hanging in the balance... what will happen to him and all the people he meets? Special appearence: The Phoenix Force!!

P.S. If you don't know who The Phoenix Force is, go to this link http://marvel.com/universe/Phoenix_Force

Thats as much i can provide without spoiling the story......maybe i will reveal the main character's name: Joey 'Joe' Kaine Tan.

He is an American-Chinese, American on hs father's side. Lived in America for 8 yrs before migrating to Singapore. Wasn't exactly the most popular kid around, often getting into fights and doing poorly in school. This often resulted in his father giving him a good beating, slowly developing into abuse as his father found it hard to hold a proper job. eventually his father was killed in an accident at a construction site and his life got worst. Only completing secondary school, he had to enter NS and thats when his life got complicated.

Phew, damn, I got carried away. Ah well, the second review then.

Second Story:
In a world quite like ours now, the denizens strangely have not invented advance weaponry despite modern buildings, technology. Instead, they still use sword and shields, spears and axe, and......Mystical Swords!? In this world, there are people who possess swords imbued with powers from the divine beings that brought life to all creation. However, possession of one such sword does not mean you can wield it, the sword chooses its user, and these people are known as simply "Nesohc fo Sdrows" which means chosen people of the swords. However, where there is light, there is dark. Evil creatures known as Xoarks roam the land and threaten the very existance of the world. This story follows the trials and tribulations of 3 youths, the young man who is to destroy creation, the youth who was chosen by the people as savior of the world and the maiden who brings life to flowers and finds herself caught in between.

Main Characters:

Kenichi Taino / Arl Asterio / Shin Maou aka True Demon King / The Destroyer

Owner of the demon sword, Sealed sword of Chaos Destruction: Ma Ha Ou, the heirloom sword of the king of the Xoarks. How he came to be in possession of it is unknown but he clearly has a past he does not wish to reveal. Travelling the world alone, the very sight of the sword has earned him many unfounded ill-treatments from the people of the cities he has visited. Prophecy has told that when the possesor of the demon sword has appeared, the world would be plunged into chaos and despair and only when the saint sword has appeared, its possessor shall cut through the darkness and destroy the cause of all evil. There in lies the reason for which this young man to be feared.

Teresa Claire von Schneider / The Flower Goddess

Owner of the Sword of the 8-Flower Maiden. She works as a free lance dancer for many places and is well known for her abilities in dance. Rumor has it that she once brought a withered garden back to life just through her dancing alone. But like thay said, a beautiful rose belies the fact that it has thorns, this lady is equally deadly with that sword in her hands. Also, behind that gently exterior hides a burning passion for revenge against the one who slaughtered her family like pigs, the one who has a strange mark on his back, yellow eyes and a mystical sword.

Saiyol Renshii / The Savior

Owner of the Sword of Judgemental Light. Since birth, this youth has had to bear the burden of being the "One". In his adolescence, he has had to learn the proper use of a sword, forced to do everything his parents wished, just to be the "One" everyone desired. Slowly, he grew to resent all things evil, especially, The Destroyer, the root of his misery. Eventually, he grew up to have a twisted sense of justice. For the case of people who have done wrong, even minor ones, have been the victims to his extreme belief that all evil doers must be punished or even destroyed for the sake of mankind.

Well, thats that. So, did that get you all wondering what will happen next? Look forward to it!! And please be reminded of the drawing contest! Its still open!